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‎If there's something wrong or unnatural, could you correct these English sentences? I'd like to know common colloquial phrases! 🙇‍♂️

As a side note,A and B stand for people❗️


B: What's it about?
A: Jailbird" is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.
B: What's The Undateables about?
A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship with a dating service and follows the love.

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‎If there's something wrong or unnatural, cwould you please correct these English sentences?

"Could" means if we're able to correct them (できる) while "would" means something like, if you have the time or inclination, would you please correct these?

I'd like to know common colloquial phrases! 🙇‍♂️

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

Typo

B: What's it about?

A: _Jailbird"_ is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "_Girls Incarcerated"_ is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.

If these are books, we'd underline the title. If they're songs or short stories, we'd use quotation marks with the titles. The mnemonic for quotation marks is PASS: Poetry, Articles, Songs, and Short Stories.

B: What's _The Undateables_ about?

A: "_The Undateables"_ is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship with a dating service and follows theto find love.

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April 17, 2022

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A: _Jailbird"_ is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "_Girls Incarcerated"_ is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.

Jailbird and Girls Incarcerated is Reality show.
Which one should I use in that case?

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April 17, 2022

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‎If there's something wrong or unnatural, cwould you please correct these English sentences?

Oh, I see!
Thank you!

‎If there's something wrong or unnatural, could you correct these English sentences?

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

B: What's it about?

A: Jailbird" is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.

B: What's The Undateables about?

A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship withvia a dating service and, while a camera crew follows the loveir progress.

I saw from your replies to other users that you'd like ways to express that TV cameras are following them. Here is another way you could write this sentence.

A: "The Undateables" is a reality show in which a camera crew follows a person with disabilities as they seek out a relationship via a dating service.

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April 17, 2022

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A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship withvia a dating service and, while a camera crew follows the loveir progress.

Oh, I see!
Thank you so much!!

‎If there's someanything wrong or unnatural, could you correct these English sentences?

A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks outpeople with various disabilities looking for a relationship with ausing dating service and follows the love/agency.

Follow their hearts. Its a bit unnatural at the end of the sentence to me.

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April 16, 2022

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A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks outpeople with various disabilities looking for a relationship with ausing dating service and follows the love/agency.

"follows the love"
I wanna express "TV cameras follow them.

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April 17, 2022

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It is already implied that they are being followed since it is a reality show you dont really need to state it. However, you could say "The Undateables is a reality show that follows people with......

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April 17, 2022

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A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks outpeople with various disabilities looking for a relationship with ausing dating service and follows the love/agency.

Ok!
Thank you!!

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

Should have a space after commas.

A: "The Undateables" is a reality show aboutthat follows the love of a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship with a dating service and follows the love.

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April 16, 2022

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"follows the love"
I wanna express "TV cameras follow them.

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‎If there's something wrong or unnatural, could you correct these English sentences?


‎If there's someanything wrong or unnatural, could you correct these English sentences?

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‎If there's something wrong or unnatural, cwould you please correct these English sentences?

"Could" means if we're able to correct them (できる) while "would" means something like, if you have the time or inclination, would you please correct these?

I'd like to know common colloquial phrases! 🙇‍♂️


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As a side note,A and B stand for people❗️


As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

Should have a space after commas.

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

Typo

B: What's it about?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Jailbird" is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: _Jailbird"_ is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "_Girls Incarcerated"_ is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.

If these are books, we'd underline the title. If they're songs or short stories, we'd use quotation marks with the titles. The mnemonic for quotation marks is PASS: Poetry, Articles, Songs, and Short Stories.

B: What's The Undateables about?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: What's _The Undateables_ about?

A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship with a dating service and follows the love.


A: "The Undateables" is a reality show aboutthat follows the love of a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship with a dating service and follows the love.

A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks outpeople with various disabilities looking for a relationship with ausing dating service and follows the love/agency.

Follow their hearts. Its a bit unnatural at the end of the sentence to me.

A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship withvia a dating service and, while a camera crew follows the loveir progress.

I saw from your replies to other users that you'd like ways to express that TV cameras are following them. Here is another way you could write this sentence. A: "The Undateables" is a reality show in which a camera crew follows a person with disabilities as they seek out a relationship via a dating service.

A: "_The Undateables"_ is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship with a dating service and follows theto find love.

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