June 25, 2022
About Bojack Horseman and Decisions
Bojack Horse man is wildly thought-provoking.
Bojack Horseman is an adult animated series that follows the story of an ex-star of a 80's and 90's sitcom. More than 10 years after the end of the series, Bojack is confronted in an interview about his lack of recent works, so he decides to revive his career as an actor.
The show does a great job presenting modern and relevant themes, such as depression, drug abuse, and dysfunctional families. It represents the internal life struggles that most people face everyday. Bojack is not perfect, nobody really is, but he still tries to do his best.
When you see the decisions that Bojack make it's impossible to not reflect upon you own life choices. I love this show because it forces you to face your self and decide if you'll try to do better.
Like anything in life, becoming a better person gets easier, but you got to do it every day - that's the hard part.
You taking the time to read this means the world to me. I can't recommend this series enough. Go watch it. See you soon.
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[n] numbers between brackets are for my future reviews. Please, ignore them.
Bojack Horseman is wildly thought-provoking.
Bojack Horseman is an adult animated series that follows the story of an ex-star of a 80's and 90's sitcom. More than 10 years after the end of the series, Bojack is confronted in an interview about his lack of recent works, so he decides to revive his career as an actor.
The show does a great job presenting modern and relevant themes, such as depression, drug abuse, and dysfunctional families. It represents the internal life struggles that most people face every day [1]. Bojack is not perfect, but he still tries to do his best.
When you see the decisions that Bojack makes it's impossible to not reflect upon your own life choices. I love this show because it forces you to face yourself, and decide if you'll try to do better [2].
Like anything in life, becoming a better person gets easier, but you must do it every day - that's the hard part.
You taking the time to read this means the world to me. I can't recommend this series enough. Go watch it. See you soon.
[1] every day is split when talking about daily; it's a compound world when talking about regular, common, ordinary, etc.
[2] oxford comma to concatenate two independent clauses.
About Bojack Horseman and Decisions
Bojack Horse -man is wildly thought-provoking.
Bojack Horseman is an adult animated series that follows the story of an ex-star of a 80's and 90's sitcom.
More than 10 years after the end of the series, Bojack is confronted in an interview about his lack of recent works, so he decides to revive his career as an actor.
The show does a great job presenting modern and relevant themes, such as depression, drug abuse, and dysfunctional families.
It represents the internal life struggles that most people face everyday.
Bojack is not perfect, nobody really is, but he still tries to do his best.
When you see the decisions that Bojack make it's impossible to not reflect upon your own life choices.
I love this show because it forces you to face your self, and decide if you'll try to do better.
Like anything in life, becoming a better person gets easier, but you gothave to do it every day - that's the hard part.
You taking the time to read this means the world to me.
I can't recommend this series enough.
Go watch it.
See you soon.
June 26, 2022
Thank you for taking the time to read and correct this text. It helped me a lot.
When you see the decisions that Bojack make it's impossible to not reflect upon your own life choices.
I love this show because it forces you to face your self and decide if you'll try to do better.
Like anything in life, becoming a better person gets easier, but you got to do it every day - that's the hard part.
"got to do it" is very common but informal -- in formal writing it would be "you have to do it" or "you must do it"
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Nice work! Just a few things I haven't seen corrections of yet :)
June 26, 2022
Thank you for the corrections. :)
About Bojack Horseman and Decisions
Bojack Horse man is wildly thought-provoking.
Bojack Horseman is an adult animated series that follows the story of an ex-star of a 80's and 90's sitcom.
More than 10 years after the end of the series, Bojack is confronted in an interview about his lack of recent works, so he decides to revive his career as an actor.
The show does a great job presenting modern and relevant themes, such as depression, drug abuse, and dysfunctional families.
It represents the internal life struggles that most people face every day.
every day = daily
everyday = normal, common, ordinary
Bojack is not perfect, n. Nobody really is, but he still tries to do his best.
When you see the decisions that Bojack makes, it's impossible to not reflect upon you own life choices.
I love this show because it forces you to face your self and decide if you'll try to do better.
Like anything in life, becoming a better person gets easier, but you've got to do it every day - that's the hard part.
You taking the time to read this means the world to me.
I can't recommend this series enough.
Go watch it.
See you soon.
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Good job! Your English is really good. :)
June 26, 2022
Thank you. Your corrections are very clarifying.
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Please, ignore them. |
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Bojack Horseman is wildly thought-provoking. |
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Bojack Horseman is an adult animated series that follows the story of an ex-star of a 80's and 90's sitcom. |
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More than 10 years after the end of the series, Bojack is confronted in an interview about his lack of recent works, so he decides to revive his career as an actor. |
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The show does a great job presenting modern and relevant themes, such as depression, drug abuse, and dysfunctional families. |
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It represents the internal life struggles that most people face every day [1]. |
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Bojack is not perfect, but he still tries to do his best. |
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When you see the decisions that Bojack makes it's impossible to not reflect upon your own life choices. |
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I love this show because it forces you to face yourself, and decide if you'll try to do better [2]. |
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Like anything in life, becoming a better person gets easier, but you must do it every day - that's the hard part. |
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You taking the time to read this means the world to me. |
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I can't recommend this series enough. |
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Go watch it. |
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See you soon. |
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[1] every day is split when talking about daily; it's a compound world when talking about regular, common, ordinary, etc. |
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[2] oxford comma to concatenate two independent clauses. |
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