Feb. 19, 2025
Yes, I'm currently in a relationship with my boyfriend, Rui. We met at the college/ university, and we were very close friends back in that time. Fast forward to adulthood life, we went to a party, and then we kissed, and since that day, I never let him go away. Back when I was single, I enjoyed going on dates because I love to meet new people. I wrote here that Rui is not my husband yet, but sometimes we talk about marriage, but we talk when it occurs some specific topic, and we have a friend who is going to marry this year in the summer. I don't know if I agree to be a bridesmaid, just because I lost some connection with the bride and she is asking a lot of stuff like doing my costume dress or doing the dance for the bride or going to nowhere and doing the bachelorette party.
About being single or married
Yes, I'm currently in a relationship with my boyfriend, Rui.
We met at the college/ university, and we were very close friends back in that time.
Fast forward to adulthood life, we went to a party, and then we kissed, and since that day, I never let him go away.
Back when I was single, I enjoyed going on dates because I love tod meeting new people.
I wrote here that Rui is not my husband yet, but sometimes we talk about marriage, but we talk when it occurs some specific topic, and we have a friend who is going to marry this year in the summer.
I don't know if I will agree to be a bridesmaid, just because I lost some connection with the bride and she is asking a lot of stuff like doing my costume dress or doing the dance for the bride or going to nowhere and doing the bachelorette party.
About bBeing sSingle or mMarried
Important words in title have capital letters.
Yes, I'm currently in a relationship with my boyfriend, Rui.
Don't think you need the 'Yes'. Rui is part of the main sentence so do not need a comma.
We met at the college/ university, and we were very close friends back in that time.
college/university is just a generic description of your time somewhere and not referring to a specific already introduced place so no 'the' needed.
Fast forward to adulthood life, we went to a party, and then we kissed, and since that day, I have never let him go away.
'go' rather than 'go away' sounds better here. Use a perfect tense as you are describing something that started in the past and is still happening.
Back when I was single, I enjoyed going on dates because I love to meet new people.
I wrote here that Rui is not my husband yet, but sometimes we talk about marriage, but we talk when it occursonly when some specific topic, comes up and we have a friend who is going to marry this year in the summer.
You can just say 'this summer'. The verb 'comes up' sounds better here. When a topic 'comes up' it means it is mentioned or talked about in conversation
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'I will agree' or 'I'm going to agree' as you are talking about plans for the future. If you don't speak with the bride as much as you used to you can use the phrase ' lost touch with' again needs to be perfect tense as you are talking about something that started in the past and is still happening. You would probably just say bridesmaid's dress here. I am assuming you mean 'going somewhere' as going to a place as opposed to 'going nowhere'
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Very good work. Keep an eye out for the perfect tense.
About being single or married
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For some reason, “at college” sounds like you were both there for reasons not related to being students or teachers, as if you each had a job that happened to take place on the campus.
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Do you mean “dance for the bride” as an event prior to the wedding? This might be what we call a “bridal shower.”
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This is good! I found it clear and easy to follow. I just added some suggestions to sound more like how I talk. I wish you and Rui a life of happiness!
I wrote here that Rui is not my husband yet, but sometimes we talk about marriage, but we talk when it occurs some specific topic, and we have a friend who is going to marry this year in the summer. I wrote here that Rui is not my husband yet, but sometimes we talk about marriage, but we talk when it I wrote here that Rui is not my husband yet, but sometimes we talk about marriage, but You can just say 'this summer'. The verb 'comes up' sounds better here. When a topic 'comes up' it means it is mentioned or talked about in conversation This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I don't know if I agree to be a bridesmaid, just because I lost some connection with the bride and she is asking a lot of stuff like doing my costume dress or doing the dance for the bride or going to nowhere and doing the bachelorette party. I don't know if I will agree to be a bridesmaid, just because I lost Do you mean “dance for the bride” as an event prior to the wedding? This might be what we call a “bridal shower.” I don't know if I will agree to be a bridesmaid, 'I will agree' or 'I'm going to agree' as you are talking about plans for the future. If you don't speak with the bride as much as you used to you can use the phrase ' lost touch with' again needs to be perfect tense as you are talking about something that started in the past and is still happening. You would probably just say bridesmaid's dress here. I am assuming you mean 'going somewhere' as going to a place as opposed to 'going nowhere' I don't know if I will agree to be a bridesmaid, just because I lost some connection with the bride and she is asking a lot of stuff like doing my costume dress or doing the dance for the bride or going |
About being single or married This sentence has been marked as perfect! About Important words in title have capital letters. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Yes, I'm currently in a relationship with my boyfriend, Rui. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Don't think you need the 'Yes'. Rui is part of the main sentence so do not need a comma. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
We met at the college/ university, and we were very close friends back in that time. We met at For some reason, “at college” sounds like you were both there for reasons not related to being students or teachers, as if you each had a job that happened to take place on the campus. We met at college/university is just a generic description of your time somewhere and not referring to a specific already introduced place so no 'the' needed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Fast forward to adulthood life, we went to a party, and then we kissed, and since that day, I never let him go away. Fast Fast forward to adulthood life, we went to a party, and then we kissed, and since that day, I have never let him go 'go' rather than 'go away' sounds better here. Use a perfect tense as you are describing something that started in the past and is still happening. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Back when I was single, I enjoyed going on dates because I love to meet new people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Back when I was single, I enjoyed going on dates because I love |
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