Oct. 7, 2022
About a small town
I live in a small town. There are many hills,brooks, houses and people. May be the town is a little beautiful. But I don't like it.Because everything here is about money power. I don't like this life. I yearn for quiet and pleasant nature. I also yearn for the advancement and prosperity of big cities. But they are not realistic. In the vast world, I am just a small and mediocre human being like an ant.
A small question: Are you full of expectations for the future? :D
About a small town
I live in a small town.
There are many hills, brooks, houses and people.
May be the town is a little beautiful.
'Perhaps' instead of 'maybe' sounds better also!
But I don't like it.Because e Everything here is about money and power.
I don't like this life.
I yearn for quiet and pleasant nature.
I also yearn for the advancement and prosperity of big cities.
But theyat are not realistic.
In theis vast world, I am just a small and mediocre human being, like an ant.
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fantastic!
Oct. 14, 2022
Thank you! :)
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There are many hills, brooks, houses, and people.
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But I don't like it.B, because everythingone here is about money and power.
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I also yearn for the advancement and prosperity of big ca prosperous life in big cities, where there are plenty of career advancement opportunities.
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But theyse yearnings are not realistic.
In theis vast world, I am just a small and mediocre human being, like an ant.
Oct. 7, 2022
Thank you so much! :D
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