Jan. 15, 2022
Aborigine
The Aborigine were the first people to live in Australia thousands of years ago. The crocodile tried to drag them off into the water. They crawled out of the tent on their hands and knees. They eat specifically leaves than drugs. They drink water whereby a reed and eat insect like worms. This are her survival skills and her habits . They from aircraft visit they and her live .
The crocodiles tried to drag them off into the water.
They eat specifically leaves than drugs.
Maybe this is what you meant?: "Specifically, they eat leaves, and then drugs."
They drink water wherenearby a reed and eat insects like worms.
It may be better to say "they eat insects such as worms" as the current sentence could be misread as "they eat insects as if they were worms"
Thisese are their survival skills and her habits .
Use "these" and "their" since (I think) you are talking about a group of people
They from aircraft visit they and her live .
I don't quite understand what this sentence was supposed to be.
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Nice job! Interesting story.
Jan. 18, 2022
thank you very much
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The Aborigine were the first people to live in Australia thousands of years ago. |
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The crocodile tried to drag them off into the water. The crocodiles tried to drag them off into the water. |
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They crawled out of the tent on their hands and knees. |
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They eat specifically leaves than drugs. They eat specifically leaves than drugs. Maybe this is what you meant?: "Specifically, they eat leaves, and then drugs." |
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They drink water whereby a reed and eat insect like worms. They drink water It may be better to say "they eat insects such as worms" as the current sentence could be misread as "they eat insects as if they were worms" |
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This are her survival skills and her habits . Th Use "these" and "their" since (I think) you are talking about a group of people |
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They from aircraft visit they and her live . They from aircraft visit they and her live . I don't quite understand what this sentence was supposed to be. |
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