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There is a widespread viewpoint that enhancing the quality of living should be the foremost purpose of scientical development. I completely share the sam eidea with that opinion and in this essay, i will provide some reasons for that.
Firstly, the breakthroughs that science provides for the healthcare sector is undeniable. Many vaccines or medical solutions have saved millions of lives, and i will take an example of covid 19 vaccines produced in the prolonged pandemic. Furthermore, the prosthetic limbs or enchromas bring so much happy for the unlucky ones.
Secondly, the improvement in science leads to development in food production and som many aspects of living. In this era of increasing urbanisation and lacking ogf farmland, many eco-freindly planting solutions have been searched and applied, which helps to ensure the health of the community.
To sum up, it is so apparent that the success in researching in sciencehas brought so many crucial benefits to human’s lives. Its capability to bring the best solutions in time of health crisis and agriculture appliances prove the vital target of leveling the quality of life.
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In this era of increasing urbanisation and lacking ogf farmland, many eco-freindly planting solutions have been searched and applied, which helps to ensure the health of the community.


In this era of increasing urbanisation and lacking ogf farmland, many eco-freiendly planting solutions have been researched and applied, which helps to ensure the health of the community. In this era of increasing urbanisation and lacking of farmland, many eco-friendly planting solutions have been resarched and applied, which helps to ensure the health of the community.

In this era of increasing urbaniszation and lacking ogf farmland, many eco-freiendly planting solutions have been searchdiscovered and applied, which helps to ensure the health of the community. In this era of increasing urbanization and lack of farmland, many eco-friendly planting solutions have been discovered and applied, which helps to ensure the health of the community.

"searched" usually is followed my a proposition like "for"

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There is a widespread viewpoint that enhancing the quality of living should be the foremost purpose of scientical development.


There is a widespread viewpoint that enhancing the quality of living should be the foremost purpose of scienticalfic development. There is a widespread viewpoint that enhancing the quality of living should be the foremost purpose of scientific development.

There is a widespread viewpoint that enhancing the quality of living should be the foremost purpose of scienticalfic development. There is a widespread viewpoint that enhancing the quality of living should be the foremost purpose of scientific development.

I completely share the sam eidea with that opinion and in this essay, i will provide some reasons for that.


I completely share the sam e idea with that opinion and in this essay, iI will provide some reasons for that. I completely share the same idea with that opinion and in this essay, I will provide some reasons for that.

I would say: I completely agree with this, and...

I completely share the sam eidea with that opinionagree and in this essay, iI will provide some reasons for that. I completely agree and in this essay, I will provide some reasons for that.

This way is more concise.

Firstly, the breakthroughs that science provides for the healthcare sector is undeniable.


Firstly, the breakthroughs that science provides for the healthcare sector isare undeniable. Firstly, the breakthroughs that science provides for the healthcare sector are undeniable.

Subject-verb agreement

Many vaccines or medical solutions have saved millions of lives, and i will take an example of covid 19 vaccines produced in the prolonged pandemic.


Many vaccines orand medical solutions have saved millions of lives, and i will take an. For example of, the covid 19 vaccines produced during the prolonged pandemic. Many vaccines and medical solutions have saved millions of lives. For example, the covid 19 vaccines produced during the prolonged pandemic.

I would add a year or some sentence that indicates when the pandemic was.

Many vaccines or medical solutions have saved millions of lives, and i will take an example oflike the covid 19 vaccines produced in the prolonged pandemic. Many vaccines or medical solutions have saved millions of lives, like the covid 19 vaccines produced in the prolonged pandemic.

Furthermore, the prosthetic limbs or enchromas bring so much happy for the unlucky ones.


Furthermore, the prosthetic limbs or encEnChroma glasses bring so much happy foriness to the unlucky ones. Furthermore, prosthetic limbs or EnChroma glasses bring so much happiness to the unlucky ones.

The word you are looking for is: technological advancements. I would explain what EnChroma glasses are. I would refrain from calling them "unlucky" and use this opportunity to say that it improves their quality of life instead (:

Furthermore, the prosthetic limbs or encEnChroma glasses bring so much happy foriness to the unlucky ones. Furthermore, prosthetic limbs or EnChroma glasses bring so much happiness to the unlucky ones.

You don't need a "the" because you are referring to prosthetics in general, not a specific set. "Happy" is an adjective "Happiness" is a noun

Secondly, the improvement in science leads to development in food production and som many aspects of living.


Secondly, the improvement in sciencescientific advancement leads to developments in food production and som many aspects of living. Secondly, scientific advancement leads to developments in food production.

You could explain what improvements were made or explain how these developments improved food production (:

Secondly, the improvements in science leads to developments in food production and som many aspects of living. Secondly, improvements in science lead to developments in food production and so many aspects of living.

To sum up, it is so apparent that the success in researching in sciencehas brought so many crucial benefits to human’s lives.


To sum up, it is so apparent that the success in researching in sciencescientific research has brought so many crucial benefits to human’s livesour society. To sum up, it is apparent that the success in scientific research has brought so many crucial benefits to our society.

to human life, to human beings, to our quality of life, etc.

To sum up, it is so apparent that the success in researching in sciencescientific research has brought so many crucial benefits to human’s livessociety. To sum up, it is apparent that scientific research has brought many crucial benefits to society.

Its capability to bring the best solutions in time of health crisis and agriculture appliances prove the vital target of leveling the quality of life.


Its has the capability to bring the best solutions in times of health crisis and agriculture appliances prove tho be vital target of levelin improving theour quality of life. It has the capability to bring the best solutions in times of crisis and agriculture appliances prove to be vital in improving our quality of life.

ItScience's capability to bring the bestfind solutions in times of health crisis and in agricultureal appliances prove the vital target of levelcations demonstrate its vital role in increasing the quality of life. Science's capability to find solutions in times of health crisis and in agricultural applications demonstrate its vital role in increasing the quality of life.

"leveling" means to make something glad

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