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July 3, 2022

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I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.โœ๏ธ




B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something. I want to go to Ueno. Is this the right train?
A: Is Ueno station correct?
B: Yes
A: Ok, let me check.
B: Yes, that's right!
B: By the way, can you also tell me the fastest way to get there?
A: Well, there are two transfers.
If you wait 10 minutes for the next train, you can go without changing trains.
B: How much difference in time will it make?
A: The train with two transfers will arrive at Tokyo Station at 20:03, and the train without transfers will arrive at 20:11.
B: Then I'll go without transfers.
How do I get there?
A: Take the Tobu Skytree Line train to Nakameguro departing at 42 minutes from platform 1, and you can go without changing trains!
B: Ok!
Thank you!
A: You're welcome!

Corrections

I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

"Wanna is common in spoken English but it's uncommon in writing.

I wanna speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Couldan you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

"Can you __________" is more common. "Can you take out the trash?"

You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ ๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.

Slow and clear speech is always best with foreigners!

I look forward to your constructive comments.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something.

Is this the right train?

A: Is Ueno station correc, right?

B: Yes

A: Ok, let me check.

B: Yes, that's right!

B: By the way, can you also tell me the fastest way to get there?

A: Well, there are two transfers.

If you wait 10 minutes for the next train, you can go without changing trains.

B: How much of a time difference in time will it make?

A: The trainroute with two transfers will arrive at Tokyo Station at 208:03pm, and the train without transfers will arrive at 208:11pm.

24 hour time is quite uncommon in the United States. I can't speak to the UK though.

B: Then I'll go without transfers.

How do I get there?

A: Take the Tobu Skytree Line train to Nakameguro departing atin 42 minutes from platform 1, and you can go without changing trains!

B: Ok!

Thank you!

A: You're welcome!

A&B Talk23


I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

"Wanna is common in spoken English but it's uncommon in writing.

I wanna speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


Couldan you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

"Can you __________" is more common. "Can you take out the trash?"

You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!


You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ ๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.

Slow and clear speech is always best with foreigners!

I look forward to your constructive comments.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something.


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I want to go to Ueno.


Is this the right train?


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A: Is Ueno station correct?


A: Is Ueno station correc, right?

B: Yes


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A: Ok, let me check.


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B: Yes, that's right!


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B: By the way, can you also tell me the fastest way to get there?


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A: Well, there are two transfers.


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If you wait 10 minutes for the next train, you can go without changing trains.


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B: How much difference in time will it make?


B: How much of a time difference in time will it make?

A: The train with two transfers will arrive at Tokyo Station at 20:03, and the train without transfers will arrive at 20:11.


A: The trainroute with two transfers will arrive at Tokyo Station at 208:03pm, and the train without transfers will arrive at 208:11pm.

24 hour time is quite uncommon in the United States. I can't speak to the UK though.

B: Then I'll go without transfers.


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How do I get there?


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A: Take the Tobu Skytree Line train to Nakameguro departing at 42 minutes from platform 1, and you can go without changing trains!


A: Take the Tobu Skytree Line train to Nakameguro departing atin 42 minutes from platform 1, and you can go without changing trains!

B: Ok!


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Thank you!


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A: You're welcome!


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