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sho

July 3, 2022

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I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.โœ๏ธ



B: Excuse me, may I ask you something?
A: Yeah, what's up?
B: I wanna go to Nishi Arai, is this the right train?
A: Nishi Arai?ใ€€Let me check.
Umm... No, it's this train.
B: Oh, then which train should I take?
A: Wait a minute. Platform 2!
B: Thanks!
A: You're welcome.

Corrections

A& & B Talk22

I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

We usually put spaces between sentences and emojis, but not everybody does that.

Seriously!! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ! ๐Ÿ™

Also, I'dI'd also like to get your advice on talking towith foreigners.

Connecting adverbs (ๆŽฅ็ถšๅ‰ฏ่ฉž?) sound a little more formal in English. We avoid them in casual speech.

I look forward to your constructivLemme know in the comments.! โœ๏ธ

Present tense verbs (่พžๆ›ธๅฝข) sound a little formal too. Present continuous form (ใ€Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ€ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใช็พๅœจ้€ฒ่กŒๅฝข) sounds friendlier. "Lemme know" (literally "let me know") is ๆ…ฃ็”จๅฅ that sounds playful and youthful!

B: Excuse me, mayHey, can I ask you something?

B: I wanna go to Nishi Arai, i. Is this the right train?

Let mme check.

Umm... No, it's this trainone.

A: Wait a minute.Hang on, I'll checkโ€ฆ

"Wait a minute" sounds more like the speaker just had an idea.

A: You're welcome.

Some casual alternatives:
"Sure."
"Yeah."
"Yep."
"You bet." (Older people say this a lot.)
"No problem."
"No worries."
"Absolutely."
"Of course."
"My pleasure." (Similar to ใ“ใกใ‚‰ใ“ใ.)
"Don't mention it." (Similar to ใ„ใ„ใˆ.)
"Whatever." (This one sounds contemptuous, so be careful!)

Usually, each person chooses one of these that they always say.

Feedback

This sounds really good! Casual English evolves FAST and CONSTANTLY, especially on the Internet. A lot of native speakers just invent slang extemporaneously, and that's OK! Younger Americans are sloppy with punctuation in text messages and chat too, so you can leave periods off, like this

In fact, a lot of younger Americans think periods sound sarcastic. I use exclamation points a lot because it sounds friendly!

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sho

July 9, 2022

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I've learned soooooo much!!
Thank you so much!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

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Jordan_Said

July 18, 2022

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I've learned soooooo much!! Thank you so much!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

My pleasure! ๐Ÿ˜Š

A&B Talk22


A& & B Talk22

I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

We usually put spaces between sentences and emojis, but not everybody does that.

I wanna speak like a native!!


Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


Seriously!! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!


You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ ๐Ÿ™


I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ! ๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


Also, I'dI'd also like to get your advice on talking towith foreigners.

Connecting adverbs (ๆŽฅ็ถšๅ‰ฏ่ฉž?) sound a little more formal in English. We avoid them in casual speech.

I look forward to your constructive comments.โœ๏ธ


I look forward to your constructivLemme know in the comments.! โœ๏ธ

Present tense verbs (่พžๆ›ธๅฝข) sound a little formal too. Present continuous form (ใ€Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ€ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใช็พๅœจ้€ฒ่กŒๅฝข) sounds friendlier. "Lemme know" (literally "let me know") is ๆ…ฃ็”จๅฅ that sounds playful and youthful!

B: Excuse me, may I ask you something?


B: Excuse me, mayHey, can I ask you something?

A: Yeah, what's up?


B: I wanna go to Nishi Arai, is this the right train?


B: I wanna go to Nishi Arai, i. Is this the right train?

A: Nishi Arai?


Let me check.


Let mme check.

Umm... No, it's this train.


Umm... No, it's this trainone.

B: Oh, then which train should I take?


A: Wait a minute.


A: Wait a minute.Hang on, I'll checkโ€ฆ

"Wait a minute" sounds more like the speaker just had an idea.

Platform 2!


B: Thanks!


A: You're welcome.


A: You're welcome.

Some casual alternatives: "Sure." "Yeah." "Yep." "You bet." (Older people say this a lot.) "No problem." "No worries." "Absolutely." "Of course." "My pleasure." (Similar to ใ“ใกใ‚‰ใ“ใ.) "Don't mention it." (Similar to ใ„ใ„ใˆ.) "Whatever." (This one sounds contemptuous, so be careful!) Usually, each person chooses one of these that they always say.

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