July 3, 2022
A&B Talk 17
I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I wanna speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.โ๏ธ
A: Do you need any help?
B: Yes. Iโm trying to find Dokkyou Sation.
A: Oh!
B: Do you know there?
A: Yes, but it's a little far.
B: How long would it take to walk there?
A: Well... Itโs about a forty minute walk, but you have long legs, so it might take you thirty minutes to get there.
B: Oh, thank you. So can you explain the way?
A: Well... You might wanna write that down. Would you like me to search how much a cab would cost to get there?
B: Umm, I'm wanna save as much money as possible, so that's okay.
A: Ok, so first, take the right over there. And, take the next right. And, take the next left. And, you'll see line of trees, so take a left there. And then go straight and you'll come to a bridge, go across it and turn right. And walk a bit and you'll see a convenience store on your left, turn left there. And walk a bit again, and you'll see a big road, Umm... National highway, and take a right there. And walk a little bit, you'll see a gas station on your left across the street, so you cross the street to the left and just go straight down the street. If you keep going, I think you'll hit the station. That's the station.
Did you get your notes right?
B: Yes! Can I ask it to check?
A: Of course!
Yes! Looks like it's alright!!
B: Thank you very much!!
I really appreciate it!
A: Don't worrie!
I hope you'll make it!
Take care!
B: Thank you!
You too!!
A&B Talk 17
I wannat to speak natural English, not textbook English!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I would say only use words like "wanna" "gonna" etc in informal contexts like texts to friends and family rather than pieces of writing like this
I wannat to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.โ๏ธ
A: Do you need any help?
B: Yes.
Iโm trying to find Dokkyou Station.
A: Oh!
B: Do you know how to get there?
A: Yes, but it's a littlekind of far.
B: How long would it take to walk there?
A: Well... Itโs about a forty minute walk, but you have long legs, so it might take you thirty minutes to get there.
B: Oh, thank you.
So can you explain the waygive some directions?
A: Well... You might wannat to write thait down.
Would you like me to search how much a cab would cost to get there?
B: Umm, I'm wannat to save as much money as possible, so that's okay.
A: Ok, so first, take the right over there.
And, take the next right.
And, take the next left.
And, you'll see line of trees, so take a left there.
And then go straight and you'll come to a bridge, go across it and turn right.
And wWalk a bit and you'll see a convenience store on your left, turn left there.
AndThen, walk a bit again, and you'll see a big road, Umm... National highway, and take a right there.
AndContinue to walk a little bit, you'll see a gas station on your left across the street, so you cross the street to the left and just go straight down the street.
If you keep going, I think you'll hit the station.
That's theDokkyou station.
This setence isn't really necessary
Did you get your notes righttake notes?
B: Yes!
Can I ask it toyou check them?
A: Of course!
Yes!
Looks like it's all right!!
B: Thank you very much!!
I really appreciate it!
A: Don'tNo worries!
I hope you'll make it!
Take care!
B: Thank you!
You too!!
Feedback
Good writing!
I corrected "wanna" to "want to" as I don't think you would really use it with someone you don't know (maybe that's just my opinion!)
Also, when giving directions, try not to repeat "and" too many times. Either change it to "then" or just discard it all together.
Well done :)
July 9, 2022
Thank you so much!! I learned a lot!๐โโ๏ธ
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I wanna speak natural English, not textbook English!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ I wan I would say only use words like "wanna" "gonna" etc in informal contexts like texts to friends and family rather than pieces of writing like this |
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Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang๏ผ ๐ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I look forward to your constructive comments.โ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Do you need any help? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Yes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Iโm trying to find Dokkyou Sation. Iโm trying to find Dokkyou Station. |
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A: Oh! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Yes, but it's a little far. A: Yes, but it's |
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B: How long would it take to walk there? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Well... Itโs about a forty minute walk, but you have long legs, so it might take you thirty minutes to get there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Oh, thank you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So can you explain the way? So can you |
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A: Well... You might wanna write that down. A: Well... You might wan |
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Would you like me to search how much a cab would cost to get there? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Umm, I'm wanna save as much money as possible, so that's okay. B: Umm, I'm wan |
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A: Ok, so first, take the right over there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And, you'll see line of trees, so take a left there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And then go straight and you'll come to a bridge, go across it and turn right. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And walk a bit and you'll see a convenience store on your left, turn left there.
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And walk a bit again, and you'll see a big road, Umm... National highway, and take a right there.
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And walk a little bit, you'll see a gas station on your left across the street, so you cross the street to the left and just go straight down the street.
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If you keep going, I think you'll hit the station. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's the station. That's This setence isn't really necessary |
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Did you get your notes right? Did you |
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B: Yes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Can I ask it to check? Can |
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A: Of course! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Looks like it's alright!! Looks like it's all right! |
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B: Thank you very much!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really appreciate it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Don't worrie! A: |
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I hope you'll make it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Take care! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Thank you! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You too!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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