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Writing exercise

This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.

Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.

I'd wish it could last forever. Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go. Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.

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Writing exercise

This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.

Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.

I'd wish it could last forever.

Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.

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This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.

Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.

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April 15, 2024

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Writing exercise

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Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.

I'd wish it could last forever.

Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.

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April 15, 2024

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Writing exercise


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This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.


This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, or calming) and denoting it with a different emotion. This exercise consisted on writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, or calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.

This exercise consisted onf writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion. This exercise consisted of writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This exercise consisted onf writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion. This exercise consisted of writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.

This exercise consisted onf writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different with an emotion. This exercise consisted of writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) with an emotion.

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Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family.


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Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family. Experience: Having a nice day with my family.

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Experiencie: Having a nice day with my family. Experience: Having a nice day with my family.

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I'd wish it could last forever.


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I'd wish it could last forever. I wish it could last forever.

I'd wish it could have lasted forever. I wish it could have lasted forever.

I'd wished it could last forever. I wished it could last forever.

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Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.


Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go. Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.

Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowedew so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go. Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flew so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.

Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowedwent by so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go. Their smooth voices resounding in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time went by so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.

You could also say "but time had flown so quickly I didn't realize when I had to leave"

Their smooth voices resoundinged in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowpassed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go. Their smooth voices resounded in my head, but the time passed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.

this should be in the past tense

Their smooth voices resoundechoing in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go. Their smooth voices echoing in my head made me feel comfortable, but the time flowed so fast that I didn't realize when I had to go.

Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.


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Now, I can only evoque asmile from nostalgic smilea when I think about it. Now, I smile from nostalgia when I think about it.

I think you meant "evoke" but it doesn't make much sense here

Now, I can only evoquke a nostalgic smile when I think aboutever I look back upon it. Now, I can only evoke a nostalgic smile whenever I look back upon it.

"look back upon" sounds more poetic :D

Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it. Now, I can only evoque a nostalgic smile when I think about it.

This is a nice sentence if a bit poetic

Now, I can only evoqueremember (?) the day with a nostalgic smile when I think about it. Now, I can only remember (?) the day with a nostalgic smile when I think about it.

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I'm going to try a writing exercise which consist in writing about an experience (it can be positive, saddening, annoying, calming) and denoting it with a different emotion.


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