It' was my first time trying this restaurant, t. The food was unexpectedly good, and I ate a lot. It was my first time trying this restaurant. The food was unexpectedly good, and I ate a lot.

"It's" = "it is" Since this is past tense, you'll want to say "it was"

It' was my first time trying this restaurant, t. The food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot. It was my first time trying this restaurant. The food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot.

It's my first time trying this restaurant, t. The food was unexpectedly goodamazing, and I ate a lot. It's my first time trying this restaurant. The food was unexpectedly amazing, and I ate a lot.

It' was my first time trying this restaurant,; the food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot. It was my first time trying this restaurant; the food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot.

this breaks up the subject+verb pairings.

It's my first time trying this restaurant, t. The food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot. It's my first time trying this restaurant. The food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot.

It' was my first time atrying thisat restaurant, and the food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot. It was my first time at that restaurant, and the food was unexpectedly good and I ate a lot.

About mMy dDay About My Day

About mMy dDay About My Day

How' has your day been? How has your day been?

In casual English, you might hear someone say "How's your day been?" But it's technically incorrect, because the real phrase is "how has your day been" - whereas "how's" translates to "how is" - which is not grammatically correct.

How's your day been? How's your day been?

“How’s” is fine in American English. See here: https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/hows

How' has your day been? How has your day been?

Today I made my breakfast in the morning,. I had some eggs and dumplings. Today I made breakfast in the morning. I had some eggs and dumplings.

You could say "made my breakfast" but it's more natural to say "made breakfast"

Today I made my breakfast in the morning,. I had some eggs and dumplings. Today I made my breakfast in the morning. I had some eggs and dumplings.

Today, I made my breakfast in the morning,. I had some eggs and dumplings. Today, I made my breakfast in the morning. I had some eggs and dumplings.

Today I made my breakfast in the morning,; I had some eggs and dumplings. Today I made my breakfast in the morning; I had some eggs and dumplings.

There are various ways to do it (with a semi-colon, a dash, etc.), but you need to break these two parts up because you have two subject + verb pairs.

Today I made my breakfast in the morning, I hadOPTION A: Today I cooked some some eggs and dumplings for breakfast in the morning. OPTION B: This morning I made some some eggs and dumplings for breakfast. OPTION A: Today I cooked some some eggs and dumplings for breakfast in the morning. OPTION B: This morning I made some some eggs and dumplings for breakfast.

In the afternoon, I went to dance class.(NOTE: The comma is optional) (NOTE: The comma is optional)

I felt exhausted after the class, as because I hadn't danced for quite a long time. I felt exhausted after the class because I hadn't danced for quite a long time.

More natural.

I felt exhausted after the class, as I hadven't danced for quite a long time. I felt exhausted after the class, as I haven't danced for quite a long time.

I felt exhausted after the class, as I hadn't danced for quite a long time.N(OTE: You safely delete the word "the" to make the sentence more succinct.) N(OTE: You safely delete the word "the" to make the sentence more succinct.)

Later on, I had dinner with my sister at thea restaurant near our home. Later on, I had dinner with my sister at a restaurant near our home.

“A” is more natural since you haven’t mentioned the restaurant before.

Later on, I had dinner with my sister at thea restaurant near our home. Later on, I had dinner with my sister at a restaurant near our home.

This is very small, but "the" restaurant makes it seem like there is only one restaurant near your home. Maybe that's true, and you can ignore my correction :).

Later on, I had dinner with my sister at thea restaurant near our home. Later on, I had dinner with my sister at a restaurant near our home.