Aug. 18, 2022
I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appear with sunny day, it can be more hot than normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vapor.
BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a summer big rain. the air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.
I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain alway appear with sunny day, it can be more hotit alway falls on sunny days. Hotter than a normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vaporsteamy.
I used to hate summer rain, because in my village, it alway falls on sunny days. Hotter than a normal sunny day, the air feels steamy.
BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C, all day long in 40 °C heat, I can't wait for a summer big raindownpour.
BUT, after suffering all day long in 40 °C heat, I can't wait for a summer downpour.
tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.
The air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.
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Summer Rain
I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain always appeared with a sunny day, so it can be more hotould be hotter than normal sunny day,. It's when the air feels like becomeas if it's turning into water vapor.
I used to hate summer rain, because in my village, summer rain always appeared with a sunny day so it could be hotter than normal sunny day. It's when the air feels as if it's turning into water vapor.
BUT, after suffering for a long day withof 40 °C,I can't wait for a big summer big rain.
BUT, after suffering a long day of 40 °C,I can't wait for a big summer rain.
tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention for the plants and wild animals.
The air is too dry for me, not to mention for the plants and wild animals.
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Great job!
Summmer rain
Summer rain
I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain alway appear with sunny days came on sunny days. On those days, it can be more hot than a normal sunny day, and the air feels like become water vaporso humid.
I used to hate summer rain, because in my village, summer rain always came on sunny days. On those days, it can be more hot than a normal sunny day, and the air feels so humid.
I'd say humid rather than water becomes vapor, but both make sense.
BUT,ut after suffering for a long day withof 40 °C,, I can't wait for a summer big rain.
But after suffering for a long day of 40 °C, I can't wait for a summer big rain.
The BUT works if you chose to use it stylistically like that.
tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.
The air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.
Great!
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Good work, everything was very understandable!
Summmer rain
Summer rain
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I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appeared with sunny days, it can be more hotter than a normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vapordamp.
I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appeared with sunny days, it can be hotter than a normal sunny day, the air feels damp.
BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a heavy summer big rain.
BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a heavy summer rain.
Heavy is used with rain most often
the air is too dry for me, not to mention as well as the plants and wild animals.
the air is too dry for me as well as the plants and wild animals.
This majes it sound more natural
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I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appear with sunny day, it can be more hot than normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vapor.
I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appeared with sunny days, it can be
I used to hate summer rain, because in my vill I'd say humid rather than water becomes vapor, but both make sense.
I used to hate summer rain, because in my vill
I used to hate summer rain, because in my vill |
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BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a summer big rain.
BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a heavy summer Heavy is used with rain most often
B The BUT works if you chose to use it stylistically like that.
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the air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.
the air is too dry for me This majes it sound more natural
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