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July 30, 2020

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Day 1

Hello,

I'm new here and I will try to write everyday about my day.
First, I'm going to present myself. I'm an engineering from Madrid, Spain. I'm doing this because I would like to improve my English comunication skills. Altough I'm perfectly capable of understand English, my writting skills (and speaking) are not so developed.

About my day today, i dont have much to say, it had been a day like any other. I woke early up to go to work. It had been a very hot week here in Spain, specially in Madrid with maximum temperatures near 40ºC. The good news are that this is my last week of work before going on a 3 three weeks holidays, so I'm happy in this sense. I will talk about my holidays in future diary entries.

That is for today, you will know more about me in the comming days.

Thank you very much and best regards!

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Day 1

Hello,

First, I'm going to present myself.

I woke early up to go to work.

I will talk about my holidays in future diary entries.

Thank you very much and best regards!

Day 1


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Hello,


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I'm new here and I will try to write everyday about my day.


I'm new here and I will try to write every day about my day. I'm new here and I will try to write every day about my day.

"Everyday" is an adjective; use "every day" if you are talking about frequency.

First, I'm going to present myself.


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First, I'm going to presentintroduce myself. First, I'm going to introduce myself.

"present oneself" is used for formal situations and doesn't mean quite the same thing as "introduce". "Present oneself" has closer to the same meaning as "appear" or "behave". "He presents himself well" means that he behaves in a way that makes other people like and respect him. "Tips for Presenting Yourself in a Professional Manner" means tips for interacting with your colleagues and business associates in a professional way, not tips for meeting them in a professional way.

I'm an engineering from Madrid, Spain.


I'm an engineering from Madrid, Spain. I'm an engineer from Madrid, Spain.

I'm an engineering from Madrid, Spain. I'm an engineer from Madrid, Spain.

I'm doing this because I would like to improve my English comunication skills.


I'm doing this because I would like to improve my English communication skills. I'm doing this because I would like to improve my English communication skills.

Altough I'm perfectly capable of understand English, my writting skills (and speaking) are not so developed.


Altough I'm perfectly capable of understanding English, my writting skills (and speaking) are not so developed. Altough I'm perfectly capable of understanding English, my writing skills (and speaking) are not so developed.

"Write" becomes "writing" because the I is a long vowel here (i.e. it makes the same sound as the name of the vowel).

Altough I'm perfectly capable of understand English, my writting skills (and speaking) are not so developed. Altough I'm perfectly capable of understand English, my writing skills (and speaking) are not so developed.

Although I'm perfectly capable of understanding English, my writting skills (and speaking) skills are not so developed. Although I'm perfectly capable of understanding English, my writing (and speaking) skills are not so developed.

About my day today, i dont have much to say, it had been a day like any other.


About my day today, iI don't have much to say,; it hads been a day like any other. About my day today, I don't have much to say; it has been a day like any other.

"Had been" is the pluperfect should be used when the narration is in the past and you are referring to an event further back in time. Depending on when you are saying this, "has been" or "was" would be acceptable.

About my day today, i dont have much to say, it had beenwas a day like any other. About my day today, i dont have much to say, it was a day like any other.

I woke early up to go to work.


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It had been a very hot week here in Spain, specially in Madrid with maximum temperatures near 40ºC.


It hads been a very hot week here in Spain, especially in Madrid with maximum temperatures near 40ºC. It has been a very hot week here in Spain, especially in Madrid with maximum temperatures near 40ºC.

The week hasn't finished yet, so we need to use the present perfect.

It had beenwas a very hot week here in Spain, specially in Madrid with maximum temperatures near 40ºC. It was a very hot week here in Spain, specially in Madrid with maximum temperatures near 40ºC.

The good news are that this is my last week of work before going on a 3 three weeks holidays, so I'm happy in this sense.


The good news are that this is my last week of work before going on a 3 three -weeks holidays, so I'm happy in this sense. The good news are that this is my last week of work before going on a three-week holiday, so I'm happy in this sense.

The good news areis that this is my last week of work before going on a 3 three weeks holidays, so I'm happy in this sense. The good news is that this is my last week of work before going on a 3 three week holidays, so I'm happy in this sense.

The good news areis that this is my last week of work before going on a 3 three -weeks holidays, so I'm happy in this sense. The good news is that this is my last week of work before going on a three-week holiday, so I'm happy in this sense.

I will talk about my holidays in future diary entries.


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That is for today, you will know more about me in the comming days.


That is it for today, you will know more about me in the comming days. That is it for today, you will know more about me in the coming days.

"Come" is one of the exceptions to the consonant doubling rule.

That is for today, you will know more about me in the comming days. That is for today, you will know more about me in the coming days.

Thank you very much and best regards!


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