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A class excursion to the zoo

What about the trip?
Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagues to a zoo in Valencia. Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I were talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.

What we did?
When we arrived to the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map. We go over almost all the animal zones
Behind every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits... I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework.

Recommendation
For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys. They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒.


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A class excursion to the zoo

I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework.

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A class excursion to the zoo

What about the trip?

Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagues to a zoo in Valencia.

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Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.

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A class excursion to the zoo


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What about the trip?


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Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagues to a zoo in Valencia.


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Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagumates to a zoo in Valencia. Last week I did a school trip with my classmates to a zoo in Valencia.

Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I were talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.


Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking with my school friends and we were goofing around. Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I was talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.

Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking withto my school friends and we were goofing around. Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I was talking to my school friends and we were goofing around.

Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking with my school friends and we were goofing around. Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I was talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.

Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking with my school friends and we were goofing around. Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I was talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.

What we did?


What did we dido? What did we do?

What did we dido? What did we do?

What did we dido? What did we do?

When we arrived to the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map.


When we arrived ato the zoo, the personnelstaff gave us a leaflet with instructions and, rules, and a map. When we arrived at the zoo, the staff gave us a leaflet with instructions, rules, and a map.

The word "personnel" is more commonly used when talking about the staff internally, in an HR or finance context.

When we arrived to the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and, rules and a map. When we arrived to the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions, rules and a map.

When you list more than two things in a sentence, you only use "and" when listing the last thing For example: Today I have to buy bread, butter, milk and cheese from the grocery.

When we arrived ato the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map. When we arrived at the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map.

When we arrived ato the zoo, the personnelstaff gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map. When we arrived at the zoo, the staff gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map.

We go over almost all the animal zones


We go overwent through almost all the animal zoneszones for the varied animals. We went through almost all the zones for the varied animals.

We gowent over almost all the animal zones We went over almost all the animal zones

We go overvisited almost all of the animal zones. We visited almost all of the animal zones.

Behind every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits...


BehindAt every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits... At every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like their family, their habitat, their habits...

"Behind" would make it very hard to read....

Behind every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family they belonging to, theirs habitat, theirs life habits... Behind every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like the family they belong to, their habitat, their life habits...

Behind every cage there was a sign with information about everyach animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits... Behind every cage there was a sign with information about each animal, like their family, their habitat, their life habits...

Behind every cage there was a sign with information about everythe animals, like theirs family which they belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits... Behind every cage was a sign with information about the animals, like their family which they belong, their habitat, their life habits...

I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework.


I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework assignment. I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework assignment.

I took several notes about different felines since I'll haved to do a homework. I took several notes about different felines since I had to do homework.

I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework assignment about it. I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework assignment about it.

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For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys.


For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys. For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys.

For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spending more time visiting the monkeys. For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats , I strongly recommend spending more time visiting the monkeys.

For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys. For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys.

For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spending more time visiting the monkeys. For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend spending more time visiting the monkeys.

They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒.


They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒. They don't usually hide and they're pretty amusing.

They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒. They don't usually hide and they're pretty amusing 🐒.

They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒. They don't usually hide and they're pretty amusing 🐒.

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