Dec. 3, 2020
First Snow
Today, I saw the first snow this year when I took an electromagnetics class. My university has an engineering campus on a mountain, so I have to climb up when I take classes in a classroom. The climate on the mountain is unstable, it was cloudy, snowy, or rainy today. Due to the infection prevention for COVID-19, we have to open windows while lectures, so it was chilly and a waste of energy. This is because the heating was working but the warm air went out through the windows.
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First Snow
Today, I saw it snow for the first snowtime this year when I took anduring my electromagnetic's class.
Today, I saw it snow for the first time this year during my electromagnetic's class.
"when I took an electromagnetics class" sounds like a one time only class. I'm assuming this is an ongoing class.
My university has an engineering campus on a mountain, so I have to climb up wthen I take classes in a mountain to get to the classroom when I take classroomes.
My university has an engineering campus on a mountain, so I have to climb up the mountain to get to the classroom when I take classes.
I'm assuming your classroom is on the mountain. Let me know if this isn't what you meant.
The climate on the mountain is unspredictable,; it was cloudy, snowy, orand rainy today.
The climate on the mountain is unpredictable; it was cloudy, snowy, and rainy today.
Due to the infection prevention routine for COVID-19, we have to open windows whileduring lectures, so it was chilly and a waste of energy.
Due to the infection prevention routine for COVID-19, we have to open windows during lectures, so it was chilly and a waste of energy.
This is because the heating was working but the warm air went out through the windows.
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Wow, you have to climb a mountain to get to class. That's pretty cool!
Dec. 4, 2020
Thank you so much!
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Today, I saw the first snow this year when I took an electromagnetics class.
Today, I saw it snow for the first "when I took an electromagnetics class" sounds like a one time only class. I'm assuming this is an ongoing class. |
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My university has an engineering campus on a mountain, so I have to climb up when I take classes in a classroom.
My university has an engineering campus on a mountain, so I have to climb up I'm assuming your classroom is on the mountain. Let me know if this isn't what you meant. |
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The climate on the mountain is unstable, it was cloudy, snowy, or rainy today.
The climate on the mountain is un |
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Due to the infection prevention for COVID-19, we have to open windows while lectures, so it was chilly and a waste of energy.
Due to the infection prevention routine for COVID-19, we have to open windows |
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This is because the heating was working but the warm air went out through the windows. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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