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ElmasCapito

May 26, 2025

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Following a blind intuition.

First of all, these days I´ve had more experencies to posting, but I don´t have the energy to write it. A shadow has rolled me into a hopeless future. Once again, my future is a long road that scares me. If I do something I don´t have to, if I fail, I would lose everything. First of all, I need to approve all my assignments at my college and two subjects have been a rough challenge, so fucking difficult. I don't feel enough. I'll never get that scholarship if I don't pass those two tests. I'm really trying, although it feels like climbing the biggest mountain, and my goal is at the summit. And when I'm approaching, the air goes off and I can't breathe; my encouragement falls down and I can't move on. I wish I could have some sign that leads me to the truth and brings me energy. I need hope.
But I'm not looking for support, I'm just using it to write something, and don't abandon this habit.

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Once again, my future is a long road that scares me.

I don't feel enough.

I'll never get that scholarship if I don't pass those two tests.

I need hope.

But I'm not looking for support, I'm just using it to write something, and don't abandon this habit.

Following a blind intuition.


Following a bBlind iIntuition. Following a Blind Intuition.

Important words in a title have a capital letter.

First of all, these days I´ve had more experencies to posting, but I don´t have the energy to write it.


First of all, tThese days I´'ve had more experiencies to postingwrite about, but I simply don´'t have the energy to write ithem down. These days I've had more experiences to write about, but I simply don't have the energy to write them down.

I've been there. I tried to make it sound more natural.

First of all, these days I´ve had more experiencies toe with posting, but I don´t have the energy to write it. First of all, these days I´ve had more experience with posting, but I don´t have the energy to write.

A shadow has rolled me into a hopeless future.


A shadow has rolled over me into a hopeless future. A shadow has rolled over me into a hopeless future.

Once again, my future is a long road that scares me.


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If I do something I don´t have to, if I fail, I would lose everything.


If I do something I don´t have toshouldn't, if I fail, I would lose everything. If I do something I shouldn't, if I fail, I would lose everything.

If I do something I don´t have to, if I and fail,; I would lose everything. If I do something I don´t have to and fail; I would lose everything.

First of all, I need to approve all my assignments at my college and two subjects have been a rough challenge, so fucking difficult.


First of all, I need to approvepass all my assignments at my college and two subjects have been a rough challenge, s. So fucking difficult. First of all, I need to pass all my assignments at my college and two subjects have been a rough challenge. So fucking difficult.

Not sure what you are aiming for but looking at the rest of the piece I've put pass here instead of approve. As you probably know fucking is a swear word so I would be careful where you write it.

I don't feel enough.


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I'll never get that scholarship if I don't pass those two tests.


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I'm really trying, although it feels like climbing the biggest mountain, and my goal is at the summit.


I'm really trying, althoughbut it feels like I'm climbing the biggesta huge mountain, and my goal is at the summit., but I'm really trying, but it feels like I'm climbing a huge mountain and my goal is at the summit, but

And when I'm approaching, the air goes off and I can't breathe; my encouragement falls down and I can't move on.


And when I'm approaching, the air goes off the summit, the air becomes thin and I can't breathe; my encouragement falls down and I can't move on. And when I'm approaching the summit, the air becomes thin and I can't breathe; my encouragement falls and I can't move on.

Good correct usage of breathe

And when I'm approaching it, the air goes offthins and I can't breathe; my encouragementwillpower falils down and I can't move onforward. when I'm approaching it, the air thins and I can't breathe; my willpower fails and I can't move forward.

I have merged this sentence with the previous one.

I wish I could have some sign that leads me to the truth and brings me energy.


I wish I could habe given some sort of sign that leads me to the truth and brings me energy. I wish I could be given some sort of sign that leads me to the truth and brings me energy.

"give me a sign" is more common to say than have a sign.

I wish I could have some sign that leadpoints me to the truth and brings me energy. I wish I could have some sign that points me to the truth and brings me energy.

Signs point.

I need hope.


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But I'm not looking for support, I'm just using it to write something, and don't abandon this habit.


But I'm not looking for support,. I'm just using it to write something, andso I don't abandon this habit. But I'm not looking for support. I'm just using it to write something, so I don't abandon this habit.

The comma isn't uncommon to see in casual writing, but the period is also ok!

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