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Elmoctar5

July 13, 2025

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Som intentions and plans

I have the intention to move way to Canada through the express entry program but their is some obstacles in front of me now.
I have that my age is good enough to make me selected from the program’s, my education and job experience is also good enough to make me getting the invitation or the selection.
But, the only problem I have is that my level in French and English.
So, I need to improve myself in both languages to reach at least c1 one level.
Moreover, I need your recommendations and advices to help solve this problem in my life so please help me all of you by giving me all sources and advices to reach my goal.

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July 14, 2025

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I have that my age is good enough to make me selected from the program’s, my education and job experience is also good enough to make me getting the invitation or the selection.


I have that my age is good enough to make mMy age qualifies me to be selected forom the program’s,, and my education and job experience isare also good enough to make me getting the invitation or the selection(for me to get the invitation). My age qualifies me to be selected for the program, and my education and job experience are also good enough (for me to get the invitation).

You could leave off what is in the parentheses, it's a little bit redundant.

So, I need to improve myself in both languages to reach at least c1 one level.


So, I need to improve myself in both languages to reach at least c1 oneC1 level. I need to improve in both languages to reach at least C1 level.

Moreover, I need your recommendations and advices to help solve this problem in my life so please help me all of you by giving me all sources and advices to reach my goal.


Moreover, I need your recommendations and advices to help solve this problem in my life so please help me all of you by giving me all me learn, so please give me resources and advices to reach my goal. Moreover, I need your recommendations and advice to help me learn, so please give me resources and advice to reach my goal.

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I have the intention to move way to Canada through the express entry program but their is some obstacles in front of me now.


I have the intention to move (away) to Canada through the express entry program, but their isre are some obstacles in front of me now. I have the intention to move (away) to Canada through the express entry program, but there are some obstacles in front of me now.

You can just say "to move to Canada." You can also say "to move away to Canada," which just adds a slight emphasis about you moving. Another possibility is "to move all the way to Canada," which adds a strong emphasis about you moving (like it is very far away).

But, the only problem I have is that my level in French and English.


But, tThe only problem I have is that my level in French and English. The only problem I have is my level in French and English.

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