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2020 My Christmas Present

This year I wish my Christmas present is a…computer joystick with vibrational function.

My current joystick works normally.

But it would more fun when I play games like street fighter.

I am looking at a website sells now or used items.

So, a new joystick with vibrational function is US$10.

A similar but more cooling looking type will only cost US$20.

Which still sounds reasonable to me.

But when I look at the game console section.

A second hand PS3 with 10 games is just cost US$50.

US$50 you can’t even buy one new game disc.

My room is too small, if I had a PS3 that means no space place for another console.

But I already want a PS5 this year.

I am so confused!

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My current joystick works normally.

But it would more fun when I play games like street fighter.

Which still sounds reasonable to me.

But when I look at the game console section.

But I already want a PS5 this year.

I am so confused!

2020 My Christmas Present


This year I wish my Christmas present is a…computer joystick with vibrational function.


This year I wishhope my Christmas present is a…computer joystick with vibrational function. This year I hope my Christmas present is a…computer joystick with vibrational function.

My current joystick works normally.


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But it would more fun when I play games like street fighter.


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I am looking at a website sells now or used items.


I am looking at a website that sells now orboth new and used items. I am looking at a website that sells both new and used items.

So, a new joystick with vibrational function is US$10.


A similar but more cooling looking type will only cost US$20.


A similar but more cooling looking type will only cost US$20. A similar but more cool looking type will only cost US$20.

Which still sounds reasonable to me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But when I look at the game console section.


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A second hand PS3 with 10 games is just cost US$50.


A second hand PS3 with 10 games is just costs US$50. A second hand PS3 with 10 games just costs US$50.

US$50 you can’t even buy one new game disc.


US$50 you can’t even buy one new game disc. US$50 can’t even buy one new game disc.

My room is too small, if I had a PS3 that means no space place for another console.


My room is too small, if I had a PS3 that means no space place for another console. My room is too small, if I had a PS3 that means no space for another console.

But I already want a PS5 this year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am so confused!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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