I work remotely, so my dog thinks that I am whole day availablI'm there for him whenever he gets bored. I work remotely, so my dog thinks I'm there for him whenever he gets bored.

I work remotely so my dog thinks that I am whole day'm available for him all day when he gets bored. I work remotely so my dog thinks that I'm available for him all day when he gets bored.

I work remotely so my dog thinks that I amhave the whole day available for him when he gets bored. I work remotely so my dog thinks that I have the whole day available for him when he gets bored.

We were wondering withtalking to my husband about buying a second dog to providgive our older dog a new friend. We were talking to my husband about buying a second dog to give our older dog a new friend.

"Wondering" implies that you thought about it to yourself, but if you consulted with your husband then it makes more sense that you talked to him about it. "Provide" is correct, but "give" in this context sounds more natural and is what would probably be used in spoken English.

We were wondering with my husband about buying second dog to provideMy husband and I were thinking about getting (or adopting) a second dog as a new friend (or companion) for our older dog a new friend. My husband and I were thinking about getting (or adopting) a second dog as a new friend (or companion) for our older dog.

WeMy husband and I were wconsidering with my husband about buying second dog to provide our older dog a new friend. My husband and I were considering buying second dog to provide our older dog a new friend.

Wondering doesn't fit well in this usage. Husband is included in the we so it is not needed but by making the subject "My husband and I" we can fix it.

One day we decided to watchlook at puppies in the breeding nearbyfrom a nearby breeder. One day we decided to look at puppies from a nearby breeder.

"Look at" implies that you're going to see puppies with the intention of buying/adopting one, whereas "watch" seems like you are just watching them for fun.

One day we decided to watchlook at puppies in the breeding (?) nearby. One day we decided to look at puppies in the breeding (?) nearby.

I'm not sure what is meant by the word "breeding" here. Could it be a pet store or animal adoption center?

One day, we decided to watchvisit puppies inat the breeding nearbynear by breeder. One day, we decided to visit puppies at the near by breeder.

It would be more concise to say you were visiting the puppies not watching them.

We spent about 2 hours playing with the puppies and talking with the owners. We spent about 2 hours playing with the puppies and talking with the owners.

We spent about 2 hours playing with the puppies and talking with the owners. We spent about 2 hours playing with the puppies and talking with the owners.

It might seem not necessary but saying "the owners" is more natural.

Finally we came back with a new puppy this evening, and Bazyl was so suprised! Finally we came back with a new puppy this evening, and Bazyl was so suprised!

Finally, we came back with a new puppy this evening and Bazyl was so surprised! Finally, we came back with a new puppy this evening and Bazyl was so surprised!

It would be "a new puppy" or "the new puppy".

Now they are playing together near me and I feel that it was a great move in our livedecision. Now they are playing together near me and I feel that it was a great decision.

Now they are playing together near me and I feel that it was a great move in our livedecision. Now they are playing together near me and I feel that it was a great decision.

Now they are near me playing together near me and I feel that it was a great move in our livfe. Now they are near me playing together and I feel that it was a great move in our life.

Live is a verb, you mean to say "life". The first half of this sentence may actually be correct but it does not flow well to me.