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A Line Across the Sky

Patagonia is located in Argentina.
Patagonia definitely is incredible.
That skyline is pretty amazing.
If you are a climber, you can't help but be drwan to these mountains.
One of biggest problem climbing Patagonia is definitely the weather.
Climbing can be a dangerous activity.
Alex is the professional rock climber.
He and his partner Tommy spent five days completing the mountain climbing route.
I think he love mountains, going into the mountains of doing adventurous things.
He said, "It's important to take care of the environment."
Make sure you haven't destroyed anything.
Just make sure when you leave, the next person will also have a wonderful experience just like you did.


巴塔哥尼亚位于阿根廷。
巴塔哥尼亚确实令人惊叹。
那片天际线非常壮观。
如果你是登山爱好者,一定会被这些山峰吸引。
攀登巴塔哥尼亚最大的问题之一无疑是天气。
登山是一项危险的活动。
艾历克斯是一名专业徒手攀岩者。
他和搭档汤米耗时5天完成了登山路线。
我觉得他热爱山峦,喜欢走进山区去体验各种冒险。
他说:“保护环境很重要。”
请务必确保自己没有破坏任何东西。
只是请确保当你离开时,下一个人也能像你一样拥有美好的体验。

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A Line Across the Sky

Patagonia is located in Argentina.

That skyline is pretty amazing.

Climbing can be a dangerous activity.

He said, "It's important to take care of the environment."

Make sure you haven't destroyed anything.

Just make sure when you leave, the next person will also have a wonderful experience just like you did.

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asahan2013

yesterday

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Patagonia


Patagonia is located in Argentina.


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Patagonia definitely is incredible.


Patagonia is definitely is incredible. Patagonia is definitely incredible.

Patagonia is definitely is incredible. Patagonia is definitely incredible.

That skyline is pretty amazing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thate skyline is pretty amazing. The skyline is pretty amazing.

"Skyline" generally implies buildings/a city. Maybe "ridgeline" or simply "landscape" would work here?

If you are a climber, you can't help but be drwan to these mountains.


If you are a climber, you can't help but be drwawn to these mountains. If you are a climber, you can't help but be drawn to these mountains.

If you are a climber, you can't help but be drwawn to these mountains. If you are a climber, you can't help but be drawn to these mountains.

One of biggest problem climbing Patagonia is definitely the weather.


One of biggest problem with climbing Patagonia is definitely the weather. One of biggest problem with climbing Patagonia is definitely the weather.

One of the biggest problems [when] climbing in Patagonia is definitely the weather. One of the biggest problems [when] climbing in Patagonia is definitely the weather.

Climbing can be a dangerous activity.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Alex is the professional rock climber.


Alex is thea professional rock climber. Alex is a professional rock climber.

Alex is thea professional rock climber. Alex is a professional rock climber.

He and his partner Tommy spent five days completing the mountain climbing route.


He and his partner Tommy spenttook five days to completinge the mountain climbing route. He and his partner Tommy took five days to complete the mountain climbing route.

He and his partner Tommy spent five days completlimbing the mountain climbing route. He and his partner Tommy spent five days climbing the route.

Your version was fine, but this sounds more natural.

I think he love mountains, going into the mountains of doing adventurous things.


I think he love mountains,s going into the mountains ofand doing adventurous things. I think he loves going into the mountains and doing adventurous things.

I think he loves mountains, going into the mountains ofand doing adventurous things. I think he loves mountains, going into the mountains and doing adventurous things.

He said, "It's important to take care of the environment."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Make sure you haven't destroyed anything.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Just make sure when you leave, the next person will also have a wonderful experience just like you did.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Just make sure when you leave, the next person will also have a wonderful experience just like you did. Just make sure when you leave, the next person will also have a wonderful experience just like you did.

"Also" and "just like you did" create redundancy – I would just pick one or the other

A Line Across the Sky


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