I'm a student in law and I finished my classes in mMay. I'm a student in law and I finished my classes in May.

It's more common to say "I'm a law student"

I'm a student in law and I finished my class in mMay. I'm a student in law and I finished my class in May.

I think 'law student' would look better

I'm a student in law and I finished my class in mMay. I'm a student in law and I finished my class in May.

After Is a reward for passeding my exams for reward me I decided to travel in the world this summer. As a reward for passing my exams I decided to travel this summer.

After I passed my exams for reward me I decided to, I decided to reward myself by travel ing around the world this summer. After I passed my exams, I decided to reward myself by traveling around the world this summer.

After I passed my exams for, to reward meyself, I decided to travel in(around) the world this summer. After I passed my exams, to reward myself, I decided to travel (around) the world this summer.

My first destination is Bali because I want to discover another culture and because I read a book about the city and that makde me want to go see it, the population and the patrimony. My first destination is Bali because I want to discover another culture and because I read a book about the city that made me want to go see the population and the patrimony.

My first destination is Bali because I want to discover another culture and because I read a book about the city and that makde me want to see it, the population, and the patrimony. My first destination is Bali because I want to discover another culture and because I read a book about the city and that made me want to see it, the population, and the patrimony.

The comma before 'and' is optional

My first destination is Bali because I want to discover another culture and because I read a book about the city and that makde me want to see it, the population, and the patrimony. My first destination is Bali because I want to discover another culture and because I read a book about the city that made me want to see it, the population, and the patrimony.

Then Dublin because of his town which isit's a very old andtown, looks a like a city infrom the Middle Ages, and because I want to taste the Irish beer. Then Dublin because it's a very old town, looks a like a city from the Middle Ages, and because I want to taste the Irish beer.

Then Dublin, because of hits town, which is very old and looks a like a city in the Middle Ages, and to taste the Irish beer. Then Dublin, because of its town, which is very old and looks like a city in the Middle Ages, and to taste the Irish beer.

Wrong pronouns. Commas are important.

Then Dublin, because of this town which is very old and looks a like a city in Middle Ages, and I want to taste the Irish beer. Then Dublin, because this town is very old and looks a like a city in Middle Ages, and I want to taste Irish beer.

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And F, finally, I have always wanted to visit Canada for the landscapes, the kind people who are known for their kindest, and to eat the poutine. And, finally, I have always wanted to visit Canada for the landscapes, the kind people, and to eat the poutine.

And Ffinally, I always wanted to visit Canada for the landscapes, the people who are known for their kindnests, and to eat theheir love for poutine. And finally, I always wanted to visit Canada for the landscapes, the people are known for their kindness, and their love for poutine.

Spelt 'kindness' wrong. 'Eat the poutine' is grammatically incorrect

And Ffinally, I've always wanted to visit Canada for the landscapes, the people, who are known for their kindnests, and to eat the poutine. And finally, I've always wanted to visit Canada for the landscapes, the people, who are known for their kindness, and to eat poutine.

The aim of my travel is to practice my English, and discovered new countryies and people. The aim of my travel is to practice my English and discover new countries and people.

The aim of my travel is to practice my English, discovered new countryies and people. The aim of my travel is to practice my English, discover new countries and people.

The aim of my travel is to practice my English, and discovered new countryies and people. The aim of my travel is to practice my English and discover new countries and people.

Of course it is a fake story's just a dream but let me dream fantasize! Of course it's just a dream but let me fantasize!

Of course, it is a fake story, but let me dream ! Of course, it is a fake story, but let me dream!

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Of course, it is a fake story, but let me dream ! Of course, it is a fake story, but let me dream!