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Crows

I like crows even though some people hate them. People say that crows root through and scatter trash, and they are so ominous that witches have them. However, I think crows are clever, cute. It's said crows are intelligent as much as 7-years old children, which is incredible considering they are birds. Besides, their walking style and eyes are pretty. Personally, when I was struggling for the university entrance exam, I often listened to a song that title is ”Karasu", which means crows in Japanese, so I have an attachment for crows.

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I like crows even though some people hate them.


I like crows, even though some people hate them. I like crows, even though some people hate them.

People say that crows root through and scatter trash, and they are so ominous that witches have them.


People say that crows root through and scatter trash, and that they are so ominous that witches havekeep them (as pets). People say that crows root through and scatter trash, and that they are so ominous that witches keep them (as pets).

"They are" is commonly written/said as "They're". The "as pets" isn't necessary but it does clarify the sentence.

People say that crows root through and scatter trash, and that they are so ominous that witches have them. People say that crows root through and scatter trash and that they are so ominous that witches have them.

However, I think crows are clever, cute.


However, I think crows are clever, and cute. However, I think crows are clever and cute.

You use a comma between adjetives when they come before a noun. For example: The big, pink, and furry bunny jumped. The slimy, green toad dashed away.

However, I think crows are clever, and cute. However, I think crows are clever and cute.

However, I think crows are clever, and cute. However, I think crows are clever and cute.

It's said crows are intelligent as much as 7-years old children, which is incredible considering they are birds.


It's said that crows are as intelligent as much as 7-years old children, which is incredible, considering they are birds. It's said that crows are as intelligent as 7-year old children, which is incredible, considering they are birds.

"They are" is commonly written/said as "They're".

It's said that crows are as intelligent as much as 7-years -old children, which is incredible considering they are birds. It's said that crows are as intelligent as 7-year-old children, which is incredible considering they are birds.

It's said crows are as intelligent as much as 7seven-years old children, which is incredible considering that they are birds. It's said crows are as intelligent as seven-year old children, which is incredible considering that they are birds.

Besides, their walking style and eyes are pretty.


Besides, both their walking style and eyes are pretty. Besides, both their walking style and eyes are pretty.

Besides, their eyes and walking style and eyes are pretty. Besides, their eyes and walking style are pretty.

It sounds a little better when you change the order.

Personally, when I was struggling for the university entrance exam, I often listened to a song that title is ”Karasu", which means crows in Japanese, so I have an attachment for crows.


Personally, when I was struggling forwith the university entrance exam, I often listened to a song that title is ”Karasu", which means "crows" in Japanese, so I have an attachment special fondness for crows. Personally, when I was struggling with the university entrance exam, I often listened to a song that title is ”Karasu", which means "crows" in Japanese, so I have a special fondness for crows.

Personally, when I was struggling for themy university entrance exam, I often listened to a song that title is ”called 'Karasu"', which means 'crows' in Japanese, so I have an attachment fondness for crows. Personally, when I was struggling for my university entrance exam, I often listened to a song called 'Karasu', which means 'crows' in Japanese, so I have a fondness for crows.

You can say either 'I have a fondness for' or 'I have a liking for crows' - 'an attachment' sounds a bit off and can sometimes hold a negative connotation

Personally, when I was struggling with studying for the university entrance exam, I often listened to a song that title iscalled ”Karasu", which means "crows" in Japanese, so I have an attachment forto crows. Personally, when I was struggling with studying for the university entrance exam, I often listened to a song called ”Karasu", which means "crows" in Japanese, so I have an attachment to crows.

"an attachment to crows" sounds old-fashioned, but I think it works here. The usage here sounds playful here to me.

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