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Hello, gyuys! Hello, guys!

Hello, gyuys! Hello guys!

Hello, gyuys! Hello, guys!

"Gyus" is a typo. It should be "guys," which is the correct spelling.

Today is a great day. Today is a great day.

Today is a great day. Today is a great day.

Today is a great day. Today is a great day.

"great day" should have "a" before it, as "a" is needed when referring to a singular countable noun.

Finally I bought all the stuff I needed for swimming, it was a necessary dealpurchase, because afterin one week I will go to swimming class! Finally I bought all the stuff I needed for swimming, it was a necessary purchase, because in one week I will go to swimming class!

FI finally I bought all the stuff I need for swimming, it was a necessary deal. I had to, because after onext week, I will go tostart swimming class!lessons. I finally bought all the stuff I need for swimming. I had to, because next week, I start swimming lessons.

'All the stuff' is quite casual. You could also say all the gear. It's OK in conversation but if you wanted to be more formal, you could say all the equipment. Make sure you have a full stop at the end of each sentence and a capital letter at the start of each sentence.

Finally, I bought all the stuff for swimming,; it was a necessary deal,purchase because afterin one week, I will go to swimming class! Finally, I bought all the stuff for swimming; it was a necessary purchase because in one week, I will go to swimming class!

"Stuff" is a non-countable noun, so we need "the" before it. "Necessary deal" should be changed to "necessary purchase," as "deal" is not the right word here. Also, "after one week" is slightly awkward; "in one week" sounds more natural. The comma after "stuff" should be replaced with a semicolon, as the second clause is independent.

I’m so exacited. I’m so excited.

I’m so exacited. I’m so excited.

Be careful with spelling. Exacted is a completely different meaning.

I’m so exacited. I’m so excited.

I always sit at the my work tablemy desk and I feel that my body desires activities! I always sit at my desk and I feel that my body desires activities!

Work table is usually for crafting or manual activities. Here I would say desk for studying, reading, working. I feel that my body desires activities is not wrong but it doesn't sound entirely natural. I would say: I sit at my desk for hours every day and I feel that my body needs movement!

I always sit at the my work table, and I feel that my body desircraves activitiesy! I always sit at my work table, and I feel that my body craves activity!

"The" is unnecessary before "my work table." "Desires activities" sounds awkward; "craves activity" is a more natural expression.

And, you know, I need to throw off my weight a littlelose some weight. And, you know, I need to lose some weight.

And, you know, I need to throw off my weightlose a little weight. And, you know, I need to lose a little weight.

Is that what you mean?

And, you know, I need to throw off my weight a littlelose some weight. And, you know, I need to lose some weight.

"Throw off" is not the right phrase here. "Lose weight" is the correct expression when talking about reducing weight.

Actually we have cold weatherthe weather is cold these days, and I was at the homstay home for the most part. Actually the weather is cold these days, and I stay home for the most part.

Actually we have cold weather these days, and I was at the home for the most part. Actually we have cold weather these days, and I was at the home for the most part.

Not wrong but this would sound more natural: Actually it was cold today and I mostly stayed at home.

Actually, we have cold weather these days, and I was at the home most parthave been at home most of the time. Actually, we have cold weather these days, and I have been at home most of the time.

At the home" should be "at home." "Most part" is awkward; the correct phrase is "most of the time."

I made plans, I went for a walk a little,little walk, I did chores. I made plans, I went for a little walk, I did chores.

I made plans, went for a walk a littleshort walk, did chores. I made plans, went for a short walk, did chores.

I made plans, went for a short walk, a little,nd did chores. I made plans, went for a short walk, and did chores.

"A little" should be changed to "a short walk" for clarity. Also, it's grammatically better to add "and" before "did chores."

I feel purity now in the flat, and it is fantastic! I feel purity now in the flat, and it is fantastic!

Not sure what you meant.

I feel purity now in the flatThe flat feels so clean and tidy now, and it is fantastic! The flat feels so clean and tidy now, and it is fantastic!

I know what you mean here but an English speaker wouldn't say it like that. You could say clean and tidy, or clean and fresh.

I feel puritye now in the flat, and it is fantastic! I feel pure now in the flat, and it is fantastic!

"Purity" is a noun, but the sentence needs an adjective, so "pure" is the correct form. "Purity" doesn't fit the context here.

And about my plans: I want to write here regularly here, and now I want to write so muchany things! And about my plans: I want to write regularly here, and now I want to write so many things!

And about my plans: I want to write here regularly, and now I want to write so muchany things! And about my plans: I want to write here regularly, and now I want to write so many things!

And abouts for my plans: I want to write here regularly, and now I want to write so muchmany things! As for my plans: I want to write here regularly, and now I want to write many things!

"About my plans" should be "As for my plans." "So much things" is incorrect; "many things" is the proper phrase for countable items.

And therefore, I think, this letterentry can seems a lbittle chaotic all over the place. And therefore, I think, this entry can seem a bit all over the place.

And therefore, I think, this letter canmight seems a little chaotic. And therefore, I think, this letter might seem a little chaotic.

And tTherefore, I think, this letter can seems a little chaotic. Therefore, I think this letter seems a little chaotic.

"Can seems" is incorrect. The verb "seems" should not be used with "can." "Therefore" should start the sentence without "And."

But now I want to only share just my recent thoughts. But now I want to only share my recent thoughts.

But now I just want to share just my recent thoughts. But now I just want to share my recent thoughts.

But now, I want to share just my recent thoughts. But now, I want to share just my recent thoughts.

A comma after "now" makes the sentence more natural and improves readability.

I had an interesting experience, I was at the home and I was thinking about what to do. I had an interesting experience, I was home and I was thinking about what to do.

I had an interesting experience,. I was at the home and I was thinking about what to do. I had an interesting experience. I was at home and I was thinking about what to do.

I had an interesting experience,. I was at the home, and I was thinking about what to do. I had an interesting experience. I was at home, and I was thinking about what to do.

A period is needed between the two clauses. Also, "at the home" should be changed to "at home."

And I decided to watch something… I remembered about one popular TV show / seriales - Squid Game. And I decided to watch something… I remembered about one popular TV show / series - Squid Game.

And I decided to watch something… I remembered hearing about one popular serialK drama - Squid Game. And I decided to watch something… I remembered hearing about one popular K drama - Squid Game.

Series or K drama.

And I decided to watch something… I remembered about one popular serial -how – Squid Game. And I decided to watch something… I remembered a popular show – Squid Game.

"Remembered about" is incorrect. The phrase should be "remembered a popular show." "Serial" is more commonly used for a series that airs episodically, but in this context, "show" is more natural.

So I started this one.o watch it. So I started to watch it.

So I started this onewatching it. So I started watching it.

"This one" sounds awkward when referring to a show. "Watching it" is more appropriate.

After 2 seriepisodes I felt like I have no energy. After 2 episodes I felt like I have no energy.

After watching 2 series, I felt like I have no energydrained. After watching 2 series, I felt drained.

After 2 seriepisodes, I felt like I haved no energy. After 2 episodes, I felt like I had no energy.

"Series" should be "episodes" when talking about individual installments of a TV show. Also, the past tense "had" is needed for consistency.

And I didn’t want to do someanything. And I didn’t want to do anything.

And I didn’t want to do someanything. And I didn’t want to do anything.

You normally wouldn't start a sentence with 'and' but this is quite conversational so I left it.

And I didn’t want to do someanything. And I didn’t want to do anything.

"Something" should be changed to "anything" in negative sentences.

It will be interesting to continue watching it, but I felt that it didn’t make me betterentertain me, I guess. It will be interesting to continue watching it, but I felt that it didn’t entertain me, I guess.

It will be interesting to continue watching it, but I felt that it didn’'t make me betterfeel good, I guess. It will be interesting to continue watching it, but it didn't make me feel good, I guess.

It willould be interesting to continue watching, but I felt that it didn’t make me feel better, I guess. It would be interesting to continue watching, but I felt that it didn’t make me feel better, I guess.

"Will" should be "would" to indicate a hypothetical situation. Also, "make me better" is awkward; "make me feel better" sounds more natural.

It didn’t give my any scene, positive emotions, and I understood that I shouldn’t do things that just take my energy and leave afterme empty inside me. It didn’t give my any scene, positive emotions, and I understood that I shouldn’t do things that just take my energy and leave me empty inside.

It didn’t give my any scene,make me feel any positive emotions, and I understoorealised that I shouldn’t do things that just takedrain my energy and leave after empty inside meme feeling empty. It didn’t make me feel any positive emotions, and I realised that I shouldn’t do things that just drain my energy and leave me feeling empty.

I didn't understand what you meant by it didn't give me any scenes. 'Understood' is not wrong but 'realised' would be a better word here.

It didn’t give mye any scene,se of positive emotions, and I understood that I shouldn’t do things that just takedrain my energy and leave after empty inside meme feeling empty. It didn’t give me any sense of positive emotion, and I understood that I shouldn’t do things that just drain my energy and leave me feeling empty.

"Give my any scene" is unclear. "Give me any sense of positive emotion" makes more sense. "Leave after empty inside me" should be "leave me feeling empty" for clarity and correct grammar.

Also I want to reduce the noicse of information, music, you know, this noise from behiin the background. Also I want to reduce the noise of information, music, you know, this noise in the background.

Also I want to reduce noice of information, music, you know, this noise from behindall the background noise from watching the news, listening to music, etc. Also I want to reduce all the background noise from watching the news, listening to music, etc.

'Information' do you mean watching / listening to the news?

Also, I want to reduce the noicse ofrom information, and music, – you know, this noise from behinde background noise. Also, I want to reduce the noise from information and music – you know, the background noise.

"Noice" is a typo; it should be "noise." "Noise from behind" is awkward and unclear; "background noise" is more natural.

I also try to not focus on my love life, I mean one person who doesn’t share my feelings, unfortunately. I also try to not focus on my love life, I mean one person who doesn’t share my feelings, unfortunately.

I also try to not to focus on my love, I mean the one person who doesn’t share my feelings, unfortunately. I also try not to focus on my love, I mean the one person who doesn’t share my feelings, unfortunately.

I also try to not to focus on my love, I mean onea person who doesn’t share my feelings, unfortunately. I also try not to focus on my love, I mean a person who doesn’t share my feelings, unfortunately.

"Try to not" should be "try not to" for correct word order.

Now I can’t let it go, but I think, I just need to be patient and after some time I can feel at ease and go aheamove forward. Now I can’t let it go, but I think, I just need to be patient and after some time I can feel at ease and move forward.

Now I can’t let it go just yet, but I think, I just need to be patient and after some time I canwill feel at ease and go aheadmove on. I can’t let it go just yet, but I think, I just need to be patient and after some time I will feel at ease and move on.

Now I can’t let it go, but I think, I just need to be patient, and after some time, I canwill feel at ease and go aheadmove on. Now I can’t let it go, but I think I just need to be patient, and after some time, I will feel at ease and move on.

"Feel ease" should be "feel at ease," and "go ahead" is awkward in this context; "move on" fits better.

You know, I couldn’t imagine that I can attach to a person so easily! You know, I couldn’t imagine that I can attach to a person so easily!

You know, I couldn’t have imagined that I can attach to persould feel so strongly about someone so easily! You know, I couldn’t have imagined that I could feel so strongly about someone so easily!

Or you could say, to use your words. I couldn't have imagined that I could get so attached to someone so easily.

You know, I couldn’t imagine that I canould attach to a person so easily! You know, I couldn’t imagine that I could attach to a person so easily!

"Can" should be "could" to indicate past ability, and "easy" should be "easily" to use the correct adverb form.

Therefore I am also thinking about, you know, my interesting life and what I can add to ithis! Therefore I am also thinking about, you know, my interesting life and what I can add to it!

Therefore, I am also thinking about, you know, my interesting life and what I can add to ithis! Therefore, I am also thinking about, you know, my interesting life and what I can add to it!

"This" should be "it," as it refers to the "life" mentioned earlier.

Dance, sports, meetings… I will include it definitelydefinitely include them. Dance, sports, meetings… I will definitely include them.

Dance, sport, meetings… I will include it all definitely. Dance, sport, meetings… I will include it all definitely.

Dance, sports, meetings… I will include it definitelydefinitely include them. Dance, sports, meetings… I will definitely include them.

Sport" should be "sports" to match the plural form. "It" should be "them" because "dance, sports, meetings" is plural.

And I will share about it with you. And I will share it with you.

And I will share about itit all with you. And I will share it all with you.

And I will share about it with you. And I will share it with you.

"Share about" is incorrect; "share" should be followed directly by the object, "it."

I just don’t want to “bet all money” at" on one person. I just don’t want to “bet all money" on one person.

I just don’t want to “beput all my money” aton one person. I just don’t want to “put all my money” on one person.

I just don’t want to “bet all my money” at on one person. I just don’t want to bet all my money on one person.

The phrase "bet all money" should be "bet all my money," and "at one person" should be "on one person."

I need to be happy just withwith only myself. I need to be happy with only myself.

I need to be happy just withwith just myself. I need to be happy with just myself.

"With just myself" sounds more natural.

I think, ithis is all for today. I think, this is all for today.

I think, it ithat's all for today. I think, that's all for today.

I think, it i that’s all for today. I think that’s all for today.

"It is all for today" is slightly awkward; "that’s all" is more common.

Have a nice time, and keep in touch! Have a nice time, and keep in touch!

A comma is needed after "Have a nice time" to separate the clauses properly.

After this case I will be observing how my usual stuffs influence to me. After this case I will be observing how my usual stuff influence me.

After this case, I will be observing how my usual stuffs influence to me. After this, I will be observing how my usual stuff influence me.

Instead of 'stuff' I would say 'the shows I watch'. You could also add 'and my viewing habits' if you mean both the stuff you watch and how you watch it (for example binge-watching).

After this case, I will be observinge how my usual stuffs influence tos me. After this, I will observe how my usual stuff influences me.

Stuffs" is incorrect; "stuff" is uncountable. Also, "influence to me" should be "influences me."