Respect for the AgedElderly Day Respect for the Elderly Day

In the US, we generally refer senior citizens as the Elderly, not the Aged. Maybe this is correct in UK or Australian English.

My grandfather couldn't suddenlysuddenly couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday. My grandfather suddenly couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday.

My grandfather couldn't suddenly move his legs (paralyzed?)suddenly couldn't move his legs and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday. My grandfather suddenly couldn't move his legs and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday.

Or "My grandfather's legs were suddenly paralyzed and he fell..."

My grandfather couldn't suddenly move his legs (paralyzed?)suddenly couldn't move his legs and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday. My grandfather suddenly couldn't move his legs and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday.

Or: "My grandfather was suddenly paralyzed and couldn't move his legs and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday."

My grandfather couldn't suddenlysuddenly couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday. My grandfather suddenly couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday.

I had to switch 'suddenly' and 'couldn't', that was the only grammar mistake in this sentence.

My grandfather couldn't suddenlysuddenly couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday. My grandfather suddenly couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday.

My grandfather couldn't suddenlyall of a sudden couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday. My grandfather all of a sudden couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday.

My grandfather couldn't suddenlysuddenly couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday. My grandfather suddenly couldn't move his legs (paralyzed?) and fell down the stairs the day before yesterday.

It took about ten minutes until my grandmother called an ambulance. It took about ten minutes until my grandmother called an ambulance.

It took about ten minutes until my grandmother called an ambulance. It took about ten minutes until my grandmother called an ambulance.

It took about ten minutes untilfor my grandmother to call an ambulance. It took about ten minutes for my grandmother to call an ambulance.

It took about ten minutes until my grandmother called an ambulance. It took about ten minutes until my grandmother called an ambulance.

It took about ten minutes untilbefore my grandmother call an ambulance. It took about ten minutes before my grandmother call an ambulance.

It took about ten minutes until my grandmother could call an ambulance. It took about ten minutes until my grandmother could call an ambulance.

Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could reply to me and the ambulance crews. Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could reply to me and the ambulance crews.

Instead of he retained his consciousness, a simpler way to put it would be "He remained conscious."

Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could reply to me andthe ambulance crews and me. Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could reply to the ambulance crew and me.

It's best to put yourself at the end of a series of references to other people: "She liked him and me" (better than "She liked me and him").

Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could reply to me and the ambulance crews. Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could reply to me and the ambulance crew.

I would probably say "remained conscious" instead of "retained his consciousness," but either makes sense.

Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could reply to me and the ambulance crews. Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could reply to me and the ambulance crew.

Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could replyspond to me and the ambulance crews. Fortunately, he retained his consciousness and could respond to me and the ambulance crew.

Fortunately, he retgained his consciousness and could reply to me and ambulance crews. Fortunately, he regained his consciousness and could reply to me and ambulance crews.

After all,It took more than three hours had passed until we came back home with him. It took more than three hours until we came back home with him.

"After all" isn't really used like this. I can't really explain it so I'll try to show it. Ex: "After all, you can't be in two places at once" Ex: "He was, after all, extremely talented".

Afterll in all, more than three hours had passed until we came back home with him. All in all, more than three hours had passed until we came back home with him.

"After all" means something different ("in view of all the circumstances").

After all, mMore than three hours had passed until we came back home with him. More than three hours passed until we came back home with him.

I think I would say "before" here instead of "until" although both make sense. The difference between the two is somewhat slight and often unclear. As I understand it, “until” emphasizes the moment when something happens. An example where until is better: "Do not let your feet start moving until the gun fires." Until emphasizes the gun shot as a defining moment or trigger where the runner starts. “Before” emphasizes a period of time sequence or precondition. An example where before is better: "Most children do not start school before their sixth birthday." A sixth birthday is not always the direct trigger before starting school, some may start later, so until would be too abrupt.

After all,In total more than three hours hadve passed until we came back home with him. In total more than three hours have passed until we came back home with him.

After all,It took more than three hours had passed until we came back home with him.before we took him home, because It took more than three hours before we took him home, because

After all of that, more than three hours had passed until we came back home with him. After all of that, more than three hours had passed until we came back home with him.

It took a lot ofng time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffereding from corona virus. It took a long time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffering from corona virus.

It took a lot of time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffereding from corona virus. It took a lot of time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffering from coronavirus.

It took a lot of time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffereding from the corona virus. It took a lot of time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffering from the coronavirus.

It took a lot of time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffereding from corona virus. It took a lot of time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffering from corona virus.

'suffered' (-ed) is past tense, but sense you are talking in the present moment of that time having the verb 'to suffer' shouldn't be in past especially since you already emphasized that with 'suspected' (-ed) already past tense.

It took a lot ofng time to find a hospital because he had adue to his high fever and wasthe suspected to be suffered fromicion of corona virus. It took a long time to find a hospital due to his high fever and the suspicion of corona.

I personally thing that this sounds better. But yours wasn't wrong either. You can definitely use "because" like in @Oceandrive's correction :)

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It took a lot of time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to be suffered fromhave corona virus. It took a lot of time to find a hospital because he had a high fever and was suspected to have corona virus.

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