A writting practice

He was shoved off by the bearer of the curse. A vile act caused by a nobody. Not the White knight nor the whole honor of the house Valdimion, only a cruel man crushed by life itself, taking the spoils of the soldiers, gear and food too. The contender fall at his feet with no light in his eyes an letting out the last sigh he had in his lungs. So, he put on his gauntlets and limp towards the castle´s big door, ripped appart by the canonballs, leaving only its remains on fire.

Es sólo un texto que se me ocurrió con algunas palabras que aprendí de una canción. Me gustaría recibir correcciones de gramática y sugerencias de actividades para mejorar mi escritura