A Womean's Trick

A womean's few tears sometimescan go a long way.

This is an alternative to the other correction.

Some subordinate womean made way too many mistakes.

When seeing her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with athe wrong person, but I had actually I just pointed out her mistakes as a supervisor.

I don't want to see ither cry.

And on top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work, this kind of the women may spell further trouble for my work because she usesis using a technique she learned from her life.

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When seeingI saw her tears, I felt like I picked a fight with athe wrong person, but actually I just pointed out her mistakes as aher supervisor.

You should write "the wrong person" because you are talking about the specific woman at work you made cry.

I don't want to see ither cry.

And on top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spellcause trouble for my work, this kind of the women may spell further trouble for my work because she uses a tcompany/office because she is using a coping mechaniquesm she learned from her social life.

"Spell trouble" sounds awkward to me. "Spell doom" is a phrase you might see sometimes but it sounds too dramatic in this case.

"Technique" is vague. I don't know what kind of technique.

I added "social life" to stess that her crying isn't appropriate in the workplace.

Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of the chance, unfortunately, itme. Unfortunately for her, crying does not work on me, t. This kind of technique is verymanipulation can be tricky to use. ¶
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If you just write "unfortunately," it sounds like you mean "unfortunately for me."

A Womean's Trick

A womean's few tears sometimes go a long way.

Using "A" before a noun means the noun will be singular. Women is not singular.

I think that few is redundant and doesn't sound natural (for this sentence).

SomeA subordinate womean made way too many mistakes.

I am assuming you are referring to one woman in your workplace.

And top of that, if she lets her emotions take the lead, it'll spell trouble for my work, t. This kind of the womean may spell further trouble for my work because she uses a technique she learned from her life.

Apparently, she wants to take an advantage of the chance, but unfortunately, it does not work on me, t. This kind of technique is very tricky to use. ¶
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