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May 18, 2025

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A weird day

Today, I have a strange sensation like lost. maybe it could be caused by hangover because yesterday I had a little party in my house. also there is the fact that I need go to trip again and it makes me sad leave my cat alone, however this trip is important for me, my father who lives in other city is illnes and probabily I won't see him again. so it's a trip to say goodbye.
on another hand I wish ask: somebady could reccomend me some page in order to have real time conversations? because I really need improve my listening and conversation skills.
That is all, thanks a lot for your corrections.


Un dia raro
Hoy tengo una extraña sensasion de perdida. talvez podria ser causado por la resaca porque ayer tuve una pequeña fiesta en mi casa. tambien esta el hecho que necesito irme de viaje nuevamente y me entristece dejar solo a mi gato, sin embargo este viaje es importante para mi, mi papa quie vive en otra ciudad esta enfermo y probablemente no vuelva a verlo. asi que este es un viaje para decir adios.
Por otra parte, me gustaria preguntar ¿alguien podria recomendarme alguna pagina para tener conversaciones en tiempo real? porque yo realmente necesito mejorar mis habilidades de escúcha y conversacion.
Eso es todo por hoy, mil gracias por sus correcciones

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A weird day

Today, I have a strange sensation like I'm lost.

mMaybe it could beis caused by my hangover because yesterday I had a little party inat my house.

aAlso, there is the fact that I need go toto go on a trip again, and it makes me sad that I will need to leave my cat alone, h. However, this trip is important for me, as my father, who lives in another city, is illnes and I probabily I won't see him again.

sSo it's a trip to say goodbye.

oOn anthe other hand, I wish ask:to ask if somebaody could reccommend me somea page in order to have real -time conversations?

bBecause I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills.

That is all, thanks a lot for your corrections.

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Your English is really good. Maybe you could try Interpals, this is my favourite.

A weird day

Today, I have a strange sensation like being lost.

mMaybe it could be caused by a hangover because yesterday I had a little party in my house.

aAlso, there is the fact that I need go ton a trip again and it makes me sad leave my cat alone, h. However, this trip is important for me, as my father who lives in another city is illnes and probabily I won'I might not see him again.

sSo it's will be a trip to say goodbye.

oOn another handsubject, I wish ask: if somebaody could reccommend to me some page in orderapplication or forum to have real time conversations?

A weird day

Today, I have a strange sensation likeof being lost.

mMaybe it could be caused by a hangover because yesterday, I had a little party in my house.

aAlso, there is the fact that I need go to trip againto go on another trip, and it makes me sad to leave my cat alone, h. However, this trip is important for me, because my father, who lives in another city, is illnes, and probabily I won't see him again.

sSo it's a trip to say goodbye.

oOn another handnote, I wish to ask: could somebaody could reccommend me some page in order tosites where I can have real time conversations?

because I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills.

That is all, thanks a lot for your corrections.

Today, I have a strange sensation like I am lost.

I think this is what you meant to say that you feel lost?

maybe it could be caused by hangover because yesterday I had a little party in my house.

Or you could say maybe it is a hangover because I had a little party at my house yesterday (or last night?)

also there is the fact that I need go ton a trip again and it makes me sad leaveing my cat alone, however this trip is important for me, my father who lives in other city is illnes and I probabily I won't see him again.

Illness is a noun whereas ill is the adjective

on anthe other hand I wish ask: somebaody could reccommend me some page in order ts for me so thave real tit we can have some conversations?

I wasn’t too sure what you were trying to say here?

because I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills.

Feedback

Overall good job

A weird day

Today, I havefeel a strange sensation like I'm lost.

maybe iIt could be caused by a hangover, because yesterday I had a little party inat my house.

This sounds more natural in my opinion.

aAlso, there is the fact that I need gto toake a trip again, and it makes me sad to leave my cat alone, h. However, this trip is important for me, m. My father, who lives in another city is illnes, and I probabily I won't see him again.

soSo, it's a trip to say goodbye.

oOn anthe other hand, I wishould like to ask: if somebaody could reccommend me some page in order toto me a website where I can have real -time conversations?

bBecause, I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills.

This is kind of a sentence fragment. It might be best to attach it to the previous sentence, like "Would someone recommend to me a website where I can have real-time conversations, because I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills." Usually a clause with "because" is considered a sentence fragment.

That is all, t. Thanks a lot for your corrections.

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Good job!

Today, I have afeel strange sensation likely lost.

maybe itI could be caused by hahungover because yesterday I had a littleI hosted a small party inat my house yesterday.

also tThere is also the fact that I need go to tripto go on the road again, and it makes meI feel sad leaveing my cat alone, h. However this trip is important for me, my father who lives in other city is illnes, my father is sick and I probabily I won't be able to see him again, which makes this trip important to me.

so it's a trip to say goodbyeI'm going to see him off.

I'm not sure what the native text said, but this feels like it would put more emphasis on the "goodbye" part rather than the "trip" part.

on another hand I wish ask: somebady couldAnyways, I'd like to ask: can anyone reccommend me some page in order to have real time conversationss where I can have conversations in real time?

because I really need to improve my listenspeaking and conversationlistening skills.

A weird day


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Today, I have a strange sensation like lost.


Today, I have afeel strange sensation likely lost.

Today, I havefeel a strange sensation like I'm lost.

Today, I have a strange sensation like I am lost.

I think this is what you meant to say that you feel lost?

Today, I have a strange sensation likeof being lost.

Today, I have a strange sensation like being lost.

Today, I have a strange sensation like I'm lost.

maybe it could be caused by hangover because yesterday I had a little party in my house.


maybe itI could be caused by hahungover because yesterday I had a littleI hosted a small party inat my house yesterday.

maybe iIt could be caused by a hangover, because yesterday I had a little party inat my house.

This sounds more natural in my opinion.

maybe it could be caused by hangover because yesterday I had a little party in my house.

Or you could say maybe it is a hangover because I had a little party at my house yesterday (or last night?)

mMaybe it could be caused by a hangover because yesterday, I had a little party in my house.

mMaybe it could be caused by a hangover because yesterday I had a little party in my house.

mMaybe it could beis caused by my hangover because yesterday I had a little party inat my house.

so it's a trip to say goodbye.


so it's a trip to say goodbyeI'm going to see him off.

I'm not sure what the native text said, but this feels like it would put more emphasis on the "goodbye" part rather than the "trip" part.

soSo, it's a trip to say goodbye.

sSo it's a trip to say goodbye.

sSo it's will be a trip to say goodbye.

sSo it's a trip to say goodbye.

also there is the fact that I need go to trip again and it makes me sad leave my cat alone, however this trip is important for me, my father who lives in other city is illnes and probabily I won't see him again.


also tThere is also the fact that I need go to tripto go on the road again, and it makes meI feel sad leaveing my cat alone, h. However this trip is important for me, my father who lives in other city is illnes, my father is sick and I probabily I won't be able to see him again, which makes this trip important to me.

aAlso, there is the fact that I need gto toake a trip again, and it makes me sad to leave my cat alone, h. However, this trip is important for me, m. My father, who lives in another city is illnes, and I probabily I won't see him again.

also there is the fact that I need go ton a trip again and it makes me sad leaveing my cat alone, however this trip is important for me, my father who lives in other city is illnes and I probabily I won't see him again.

Illness is a noun whereas ill is the adjective

aAlso, there is the fact that I need go to trip againto go on another trip, and it makes me sad to leave my cat alone, h. However, this trip is important for me, because my father, who lives in another city, is illnes, and probabily I won't see him again.

aAlso, there is the fact that I need go ton a trip again and it makes me sad leave my cat alone, h. However, this trip is important for me, as my father who lives in another city is illnes and probabily I won'I might not see him again.

aAlso, there is the fact that I need go toto go on a trip again, and it makes me sad that I will need to leave my cat alone, h. However, this trip is important for me, as my father, who lives in another city, is illnes and I probabily I won't see him again.

on another hand I wish ask: somebady could reccomend me some page in order to have real time conversations?


on another hand I wish ask: somebady couldAnyways, I'd like to ask: can anyone reccommend me some page in order to have real time conversationss where I can have conversations in real time?

oOn anthe other hand, I wishould like to ask: if somebaody could reccommend me some page in order toto me a website where I can have real -time conversations?

on anthe other hand I wish ask: somebaody could reccommend me some page in order ts for me so thave real tit we can have some conversations?

I wasn’t too sure what you were trying to say here?

oOn another handnote, I wish to ask: could somebaody could reccommend me some page in order tosites where I can have real time conversations?

oOn another handsubject, I wish ask: if somebaody could reccommend to me some page in orderapplication or forum to have real time conversations?

oOn anthe other hand, I wish ask:to ask if somebaody could reccommend me somea page in order to have real -time conversations?

because I really need improve my listening and conversation skills.


because I really need to improve my listenspeaking and conversationlistening skills.

bBecause, I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills.

This is kind of a sentence fragment. It might be best to attach it to the previous sentence, like "Would someone recommend to me a website where I can have real-time conversations, because I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills." Usually a clause with "because" is considered a sentence fragment.

because I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills.

because I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills.

bBecause I really need to improve my listening and conversation skills.

That is all, thanks a lot for your corrections.


That is all, t. Thanks a lot for your corrections.

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