June 6, 2020
From a prompt written by spitzname - Could you spend a week without a computer?
I think I could. It's because I was several months without a computer when my PC got broken. But I had my smartphone, and I guess it's the same. I did everything on it, but to be honest, I prefer using a computer rather than a smartphone.
If it would be now, next week for example, I believe it wouldn't be a problem for me. For a start, I would do all little things I planned to do, but always put off. Then, I would go for a walk more often. And of course, not being distracted by gadgets means I could spend more time to look into myself, meditatate and reflect to see where my thoughts go. It would be also a pleasure to read a fascinating book, to dive into its dimension for a couple of days as I did when I was a teenager.
A Week Without a Computer
From a prompt written by spitzname - Could you spend a week without a computer?
I think I could.
It's because I wasent several months without a computer when my PC got broken.
But I had my smartphone, andso I guess ithat's the same.
I did everything on it, but to be honest, I prefer using a computer rather than a smartphone.
If it would behappened now, or next week for example, I believe it wouldn't be a problem for me.
For a start, I would do all little things I planned to do, but had always put off.
Then, I would go for a walk more often.
And of course, not being distracted by gadgets means I could spend more time to looking into myself, meditatateing and reflecting to see where my thoughts go.
It would be also a pleasure to read a fascinating book, -- to dive into its dimensionworld for a couple of days aslike I did when I was a teenager.
A Week Without a Computer
From a prompt written by spitzname - Could you spend a week without a computer?
I think I could.
It's because I wasspent several months without a computer when my PC got broken.
"I was several months without" is technically correct (cf. "was without child," etc.) but sounds quaint in informal, non-literary writing.
But I had my smartphone, and I guess it's the same [thing].
I did everything on it, but to be honest, I prefer using a computer rather than using a smartphone.
If it would beere right now, or next week, for example, I believe it wouldn't be a problem for me.
I would also replace "it" for clarity, but I think it's fine.
For a start, I would do all little the things I've planned to do, but always put off.
"I planned": I planned in the past
"I have planned": I plan to now and in the past
Then, I would go for a walk more often.
And of course, not being distracted by gadgets means I could spend more time to look into myself, meditatate and reflect to see where my thoughts go.
Alternatives to "look into myself":
- introspect
- look inwards
It would be also a pleasure to read a fascinating book, to dive into its dimension for a couple of days as I didwould do when I was a teenager.
I think the average native speaker would think "as I did" is fine, but this sounds more appropriate to me. I am having trouble locating an explanation though. "Used to" could also work.
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I think I could. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It's because I was several months without a computer when my PC got broken. It's because I "I was several months without" is technically correct (cf. "was without child," etc.) but sounds quaint in informal, non-literary writing. It's because I w |
But I had my smartphone, and I guess it's the same. But I had my smartphone, and I guess it's the same [thing]. But I had my smartphone, |
I did everything on it, but to be honest, I prefer using a computer rather than a smartphone. I did everything on it, but to be honest, I prefer using a computer rather than using a smartphone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
If it would be now, next week for example, I believe it wouldn't be a problem for me. If it w I would also replace "it" for clarity, but I think it's fine. If it |
For a start, I would do all little things I planned to do, but always put off. For a start, I would do all little the things I've planned to do "I planned": I planned in the past "I have planned": I plan to now and in the past For a start, I would do all little things I planned to do, but had always put off. |
Then, I would go for a walk more often. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
And of course, not being distracted by gadgets means I could spend more time to look into myself, meditatate and reflect to see where my thoughts go. And of course, not being distracted by gadgets means I could spend more time to look into myself, meditat Alternatives to "look into myself": - introspect - look inwards And of course, not being distracted by gadgets means I could spend more time |
It would be also a pleasure to read a fascinating book, to dive into its dimension for a couple of days as I did when I was a teenager. It would be also a pleasure to read a fascinating book, to dive into its dimension for a couple of days as I I think the average native speaker would think "as I did" is fine, but this sounds more appropriate to me. I am having trouble locating an explanation though. "Used to" could also work. It would be also a pleasure to read a fascinating book |
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