Nov. 19, 2022
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I don't know when you had your quarantine. I think the quarantine now will be totally different from what it was in the past.
Nowadays, each person has a single room, and each room has an electric entrance guard, which is connected to the phones of two policemen. When people open their doors, an alarm ring will be on the phones of the policemen.
People are only allowed to open their doors when they pick up their three meals and when medical staff take Covid tests or body temperatures for them. Otherwise, they will be warned by the policemen if they open their doors not for these reasons.
The rooms in the quarantine location that I worked in are divided into four floors. The rooms on the 26th and 27th floors have relatively good living conditions. Every room has a window no matter if the windows are to the south or north because the rooms on these two floors were used as a convenient hotel.
The rooms on the 5th and 6th floors are not that good. Rooms on these two floors were used as public baths, so half of the rooms don't have windows and those which have windows are all to the north.
The worst thing is the rooms on the 5th and 6th floors don't really have hot water. If people want to take a shower, they need to turn on the tap at least an hour in advance to get warm water (please note that it's not hot water but warm water). Sometimes they can't even get warm water.
So I guess the living conditions of the room that you were isolated in would be much better than the rooms in the quarantine location I worked in, and I bet the rooms while you were in quarantine wouldn't have electric door guards.
I don't know when you had your quarantine.
I think the quarantine now will be totally different from what it was in the past.
When people open their doors, an alarm ring will bering on the phones of the policemen.
Otherwise, tThey will be warned by the policemen if they open their doors not for any otheser reasons.
You could also write "If they open their doors for any other reasons they will be warned by police." Also, because the reasons are mentioned in the sentence before you could say "for the aforementioned reasons" instead of "these reasons".
The rooms in the quarantine location that I worked in are divided into four floors.
The rooms on the 26th and 27th floors have relatively good living conditions.
Every room has a window, no matter if the windows are to the south or north, because the rooms on these two floors were used as a convenient hotel.
The worst thing is the rooms on the 5th and 6th floors don't reallyalways have hot water.
"Really" isn't necessary in this sentence and might give the impression the 5th and 6th floors not having water is being stated as a response to a contrasting claim or something. There's nothing technically wrong with this sentence though.
So I guessI bet the living conditions of the room that you were isolated in would bere much better than the rooms in the quarantine location I worked in, and I bet the rooms. I also bet while you were in quarantine wyoul didn't have electric door guards.
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Your entry was very understandable and interesting to read. Great writing :)
Nov. 27, 2022
Thank you so much.
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I don't know when you had your quarantine.
I think the quarantine now will be totally different from what it was in the past.
Nowadays, each person has a single room, and each room has an electric entrance guard, which is connected to the phones of two policemen.
When people open their doors, an alarm ring will bering on the phones of the policemen.
This sounds so strict ...
People are only allowed to open their doors when they pick up their three meals and when medical staff take Covid tests or body temperatures forom them.
Otherwise, they will be warned by the policemen if they open their doors not for otheser reasons.
The rooms in the quarantine location that I worked in are divided into four floors.
The rooms on the 26th and 27th floors have relatively good living conditions.
Every room has a window no matter ifwhether the windows are to the south or north because the rooms on these two floors were used as a convenient hotel.
The rooms on the 5th and 6th floors are not that good.
Rooms on these two floors were used as public baths, so half of the rooms don't have windows and those which have windows are all to the north.
The worst thing is the rooms on the 5th and 6th floors don't really have hot water.
If people want to take a shower, they need to turn on the tap for at least an hour in advance to get warm water (please note that it's not hot water but warm water).
wow, this sounds rough!
Sometimes they can't even get warm water.
So I guess the living conditions of the room that you were isolated in would be much better than the rooms in the quarantine location I worked in, and I bet the rooms while you were in quarantine wouldidn't have electric door guards.
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Thank you for an interesting and well-written message.
Nov. 19, 2022
Thank you very much.
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I think the quarantine now will be totally different from what it was in the past. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nowadays, each person has a single room, and each room has an electric entrance guard, which is connected to the phones of two policemen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When people open their doors, an alarm ring will be on the phones of the policemen. When people open their doors, an alarm This sounds so strict ... When people open their doors, an alarm |
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People are only allowed to open their doors when they pick up their three meals and when medical staff take Covid tests or body temperatures for them. People are only allowed to open their doors when they pick up their three meals and when medical staff take Covid tests or body temperatures f |
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Otherwise, they will be warned by the policemen if they open their doors not for these reasons. Otherwise, they will be warned by the policemen if they open their doors
You could also write "If they open their doors for any other reasons they will be warned by police." Also, because the reasons are mentioned in the sentence before you could say "for the aforementioned reasons" instead of "these reasons". |
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The rooms in the quarantine location that I worked in are divided into four floors. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The rooms on the 26th and 27th floors have relatively good living conditions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every room has a window no matter if the windows are to the south or north because the rooms on these two floors were used as a convenient hotel. Every room has a window Every room has a window, no matter if the windows are to the south or north, because the rooms on these two floors were used as a convenient hotel. |
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The rooms on the 5th and 6th floors are not that good. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Rooms on these two floors were used as public baths, so half of the rooms don't have windows and those which have windows are all to the north. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The worst thing is the rooms on the 5th and 6th floors don't really have hot water. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The worst thing is the rooms on the 5th and 6th floors don't "Really" isn't necessary in this sentence and might give the impression the 5th and 6th floors not having water is being stated as a response to a contrasting claim or something. There's nothing technically wrong with this sentence though. |
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If people want to take a shower, they need to turn on the tap at least an hour in advance to get warm water (please note that it's not hot water but warm water). If people want to take a shower, they need to turn on the tap for at least an hour in advance to get warm water (please note that it's not hot water but warm water). wow, this sounds rough! |
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Sometimes they can't even get warm water. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I guess the living conditions of the room that you were isolated in would be much better than the rooms in the quarantine location I worked in, and I bet the rooms while you were in quarantine wouldn't have electric door guards. So I guess the living conditions of the room that you were isolated in would be much better than the rooms in the quarantine location I worked in, and I bet the rooms
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