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Jack

Nov. 16, 2022

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I am hesitant to buy a new car because I already have three cars. One Bmw 7 luxury, one Passat and one Chery suv.

I just want a small suv with all high tech to give me an enjoyable and relaxing tour journey. The car I want to buy is for my wife and we to travel after I retire and none of the current three is suitable, in my opinion.

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A WeChat Message

I am hesitant to buy another new car because I already have three cars.

One BmwA BMW 7 luxury, onea Passat and onea Chery suv.SUV.

I just want a small suvSUV with all the high tech to give me an enjoyable and relaxing tour journey.

The car I want to buy is for my wife and we want to travel after I retire and, in my opinion, none of themy current three is suitable, in my opinion.cars are suitable.

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Jack

Nov. 16, 2022

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Thank you very much.

I am hesitant to buy a new car because I already have three cars.

One BmwMW 7 lLuxury, one Passat and one Chery suvSUV.

I just want a small suv with all, high -tech SUV to give me an enjoyable and relaxing tour journey.

The car I want to buy is for my wife and we want to travel after I retire and none of the current three is suitable, in my opinion.

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Jack

Nov. 16, 2022

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Thank you very much.

I am hesitant to buy a new car because I already have three cars.

What you wrote was not wrong. It's just better when possible to not repeat the same noun. You could also say 'three of them.'

OneI have a Bmw 7 lLuxury, onea Passat and onea Chery suvSUV.

It's not wrong to list out something as 'one' but it would be redundant here since the cars are all different and there is only one of each.

I just want a small suvSUV with all the highest technology to give me an more enjoyable and relaxing tour journey.

You can use 'highest technology' or 'newest tech' in the sentence above. High tech is a descriptive word. 'I want a small suv that is high tech[...]' is what you could say instead.

The car I want to buy is one for my wife and wemyself to travel in after I retire and none of the current three iscars I own are suitable, in my opinion.

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Jack

Nov. 16, 2022

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Thank you very much.

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I am hesitant to buy a new car because I already have three cars.


I am hesitant to buy a new car because I already have three cars.

What you wrote was not wrong. It's just better when possible to not repeat the same noun. You could also say 'three of them.'

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am hesitant to buy another new car because I already have three cars.

One Bmw 7 luxury, one Passat and one Chery suv.


OneI have a Bmw 7 lLuxury, onea Passat and onea Chery suvSUV.

It's not wrong to list out something as 'one' but it would be redundant here since the cars are all different and there is only one of each.

One BmwMW 7 lLuxury, one Passat and one Chery suvSUV.

One BmwA BMW 7 luxury, onea Passat and onea Chery suv.SUV.

I just want a small suv with all high tech to give me an enjoyable and relaxing tour journey.


I just want a small suvSUV with all the highest technology to give me an more enjoyable and relaxing tour journey.

You can use 'highest technology' or 'newest tech' in the sentence above. High tech is a descriptive word. 'I want a small suv that is high tech[...]' is what you could say instead.

I just want a small suv with all, high -tech SUV to give me an enjoyable and relaxing tour journey.

I just want a small suvSUV with all the high tech to give me an enjoyable and relaxing tour journey.

The car I want to buy is for my wife and we to travel after I retire and none of the current three is suitable, in my opinion.


The car I want to buy is one for my wife and wemyself to travel in after I retire and none of the current three iscars I own are suitable, in my opinion.

The car I want to buy is for my wife and we want to travel after I retire and none of the current three is suitable, in my opinion.

The car I want to buy is for my wife and we want to travel after I retire and, in my opinion, none of themy current three is suitable, in my opinion.cars are suitable.

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