Jan. 30, 2023
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Let’s say person A work in the government and person B work in a private company, if the two of them do the same work, person A get a higher salary than person B, if person B wants to get the same salary as person A, he or her needs to do more work than person A, but it doesn’t mean working in the government is rich or something, it only means working in the government is relatively better than working in private companies. Compared with businessmen, people working for the government don’t have much money. Generally speaking, as ordinary government employees in China, they are able to live their lives without working so hard, but they are not considered rich.
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Let’s saySuppose person A work ins for the government and person B work ins for a private company, if t. The two of them do the same work, but person A get a higher salary than person B, i. If person B wants to getbe paid the same salary as person A, the or hery needs to do more work than person A, but ithat doesn’t mean working infor the government is rich or somethingpays well, it only means working infor the government is relatively better than working infor private companies.
Compared with businessmen, people working for the government don’t have much money.
Generally speaking, as ordinary government employees in China, they are able to live their lives without working sovery hard, but they are not considered rich.
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Feb. 1, 2023
非常感谢！
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Let’s say person A work ins for the government and person B work ins for a private company, if the two. If both of them do the same work, person A gets a higher salary than person B, i. If person B wants to get the same salary as person A, he or sher needs to do more work than person A, but it doesn’t mean you're rich working infor the government is rich or something, it only means working infor the government is relatively better than working infor private companies.
Compared with businessmen, people working for the government don’t have much money.
Generally speaking, as ordinary government employees in China, they are able to live their lives without working aso hard, but they are not considered rich.
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Very interesting. Good work!
Feb. 1, 2023
Thank you very much!
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Let’s say person A work ins for the government and person B work ins for a private company, i. If the two of them do the same work, person A get a higher salary than person B, i. If person B wants to get the same salary as person A, he or sher needs to do more work than person A, but i. But that doesn’t mean working infor the government is rich or somethingwill make you rich, it only means that working infor the government is relatively better than working inbetter paid, relative to private companies.
- Normally we work 'for' things, instead of 'in' them.
- Prefer shorter complete sentences to a long run-on one with lots of commas. Especially when constructing an argument, as it makes each point clearer.
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Compared with businessmen, people working for the government don’t have much money.
Generally speaking, as ordinary government employees in China, they are able to live theircomfortable lives without working stoo hard, but they are not considered rich.
I think "comfortable" is important here. It makes it clear that government jobs pay well enough to live off; but they won't make you rich.
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Interesting - do you pick stability in a government job, or opportunity in a private one?
Feb. 1, 2023
In my opinion, if a person is capable, they better do their own business. Working for the government, people can know exactly about their situation when they retire decades beforehand. If they work for themselves, every day will be a new surprise because they never know what achievement they will achieve the next day.
Feb. 1, 2023
Thank you very much!
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Let’s say person A work in the government and person B work in a private company, if the two of them do the same work, person A get a higher salary than person B, if person B wants to get the same salary as person A, he or her needs to do more work than person A, but it doesn’t mean working in the government is rich or something, it only means working in the government is relatively better than working in private companies. Let’s say person A work - Normally we work 'for' things, instead of 'in' them. - Prefer shorter complete sentences to a long run-on one with lots of commas. Especially when constructing an argument, as it makes each point clearer. - Let’s say person A work
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Generally speaking, as ordinary government employees in China, they are able to live their lives without working so hard, but they are not considered rich. Generally speaking, I think "comfortable" is important here. It makes it clear that government jobs pay well enough to live off; but they won't make you rich. Generally speaking, as ordinary government employees in China, they are able to live their lives without working as Generally speaking, as ordinary government employees in China, they are able to live their lives without working |
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