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kiwy

Nov. 24, 2021

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A Walking Day

After the exam, I started to walk in the city at 11 a.m.. Until 11p.m., I have walked more than 22400 steps.
I had a walk in a park in the afternoon, and hung out with my friend at night. I also rode nearly 10 km, and did exercise at the park.
I am so tired now.

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After the exam, I started to walk in the city at 11 a.m.. Until By 11 p.m., I haved walked more than 22,400 steps.

I had a walked in athe park in the afternoon, and hung out with my friend at night.

I also rode nearly 10 km, and did exercised at the park.

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A Walking Day


After the exam, I started to walk in the city at 11 a.m.. Until 11p.m., I have walked more than 22400 steps.


After the exam, I started to walk in the city at 11 a.m.. Until By 11 p.m., I haved walked more than 22,400 steps.

I had a walk in a park in the afternoon, and hung out with my friend at night.


I had a walked in athe park in the afternoon, and hung out with my friend at night.

I also rode nearly 10 km, and did exercise at the park.


I also rode nearly 10 km, and did exercised at the park.

I am so tired now.


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