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basiliomagno

Oct. 12, 2021

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A visit to the library

Today I visit my city's public library. It's been a while since I went to that place. Because of the Covid, the library was closed for more than a year, and just now they are allowing to loan books. I loaned a couple of books. The one I'm more interested in is "The city and the Dogs" by Mario Vargas Llosa.

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A visit to the library

Today I visited my city's public library.

Past tense

It's been a while since I went to that place.

Because of the Covid, the library was closed for more than a year, and just now they arethey are just now allowing users to loan books.

Hmm I feel like covid is just Covid. Second sentence sounds awkward

I loaned a couple of books.

The one I'm more interested in is "The city and the Dogs" by Mario Vargas Llosa.

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basiliomagno

Oct. 12, 2021

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Thank you!

A visit to the library


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Today I visit my city's public library.


Today I visited my city's public library.

Past tense

It's been a while since I went to that place.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because of the Covid, the library was closed for more than a year, and just now they are allowing to loan books.


Because of the Covid, the library was closed for more than a year, and just now they arethey are just now allowing users to loan books.

Hmm I feel like covid is just Covid. Second sentence sounds awkward

I loaned a couple of books.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The one I'm more interested in is "The city and the Dogs" by Mario Vargas Llosa.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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