Oct. 29, 2021
A visit from a friend
Hey Sam!
I am glad you decided to come to spend a night here.. We can play on the console you`ve been talking about. Can you bring it? I have a bunch of old games here we could use.
I am going to be at home all afternoon, so be free to come any time after 1 pm, I am sure you will not have any trouble getting here, The way is simple. I live in the first building after the supermarket Cerrat - the same one we went to buy some beer the other day. My apartment is on the second floor, number 23. But if you get lost, just call me okay?
A visit from a friend
Hey Sam!
I am glad you decided to come to spend a night here.. We can play on the console you`ve been talking about.
Can you bring it?
I have a bunch of old games here we could use.
I am going to be at home all afternoon, so befeel free to come any time after 1 pm,. I am sure you will not have any trouble getting here, T; the way here is simple.
The original version was a run-on sentence.
I live in the first building after the supermarket Cerrat - the same one we went to to buy some beer the other day.
"The same one where we went to buy…" may sound better.
My apartment is on the second floor, number 23.
But if you get lost, just call me okay?
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Great job, just some small fixes!
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Hey Sam! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am glad you decided to come to spend a night here.. We can play on the console you`ve been talking about. I am glad you decided to come to spend a night here. |
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Can you bring it? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have a bunch of old games here we could use. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am going to be at home all afternoon, so be free to come any time after 1 pm, I am sure you will not have any trouble getting here, The way is simple. I am going to be at home all afternoon, so The original version was a run-on sentence. |
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I live in the first building after the supermarket Cerrat - the same one we went to buy some beer the other day. I live in the first building after the supermarket Cerrat - the same one we went to to buy some beer the other day. "The same one where we went to buy…" may sound better. |
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My apartment is on the second floor, number 23. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But if you get lost, just call me okay? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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