Aug. 16, 2021
It was rainy at noon and cloudy in the afternoon. The sky became blue, and sun showed up from time to time. Weather forecast said that it wouldn't rain again, so I decided to visit Auntie De. It had been three weeks that I didn't visit her.
The main road was still in maintenance, so it was a bit rugged. I had to ride my bike slowly.
When I arrived, Auntie De was going to her fields. She advised me to stay in her house, but I refuesd and told her that I wanted to go with her. I wore her shoet rain boots which was so soft to me that I could feel the stones. But I could withstand it, because I wanted to go for a walk in the fields. After raining, the air was fresh and the plants were so green which made me very pleasant. When we passed some house, a woman asked Auntie De "why the girl sivit you so frequent?" "She is just a friend." answered Auntie De. Then she told the woman that who my father was because there were a lot people knew my father in town. I was a little surprised while I heard the word "friend". People in town hardly use the word when they are much older than you.
Because of the continuous raining, all the fields were full of water. She told me her fields. I counted that she had five piece of fields. The rice grew well but was a bit sparse. “Have you ever transplanted?" asked Auntie De surprisedly. I told her that I had experienced all the farm work when I was a child.
Auntie De dug a little mud away from the ridge to drain the water in her first field. Then we walked on the ridge of canal. The water inside was pretty linpid though there was much sand under it. I saw many small fish swimming happily. I took some pictures delightedly.
After dinner, we went to the center together. I rode my bike while she rode her electrical vehicle.
I had a good day today.
It wasToday, it rainyed at noon and cloudywas overcast in the afternoon.
The sky became blue, and sun showed up from time to timeFrom time to time, the sun would appear and I could see glimpses of blue sky.
WThe weather forecast said that it wouldn't rain againnymore, so I decided to visit Auntie De.
It had been three weeks that I didn'since I last visited her.
The main road was still undergoing maintenance, so it was a bit rugged.
I think "rough" or "uneven" would be better than "rugged" here.
I had to ride my bike slowly.
When I arrived, Auntie De was about to go ing to ther fields.
She advised me to stay in ther house, but I refuesed and told her that I wanted to go with her.
I wore her shoet rain boots which wasere so soft to methin that I could feel the stones through the soles.
But I could withstandtolerate it, because I wanted to go for a walk in the fields.
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"She is just a friend.,"
Then she told the woman that who my father was because there were a lot people in this town knew my father in town.
I was a little surprised while I heard the word "friend"."
People in town hardly use the word when they are much older thanwho are much older than you rarely use that word to describe you.
Because of the continuous rainingfall, all the fields were full of waterwaterlogged.
She told me her fields.
not sure what you're trying to say here, but this sentence is not grammatically correct
I counted that she had five piece of fields.According to my count, she had five plots of land(?)
“Have you ever transplanted plants from one location to another?"
I added a little bit extra context because the word "transplant" to a normal American English speaker almost always refers to an organ transplant, not moving a plant from one location to another.
你想说 “移植” 对吗?我查了我的词典,在中文里 “移植” 可以用来说秧苗和树木,但是英语里,我们只会说 transplant 器官,不会说 transplant 植物。
asked Auntie De, with surprisedly.
I told her that I had experienced all thedid all kinds of farm work when I was a child.
Then we walked along the ridge of canal.
The water inside was pretty linpidclear though there was much sand under ita lot of sand at the bottom.
I saw manylots of small fish swimming about happily.
I took some pictures delightedly.
After dinner, we went to the center together.
I rode my bike while she rode her electrical vehicle scooter (?).
I had a good day today.
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It was rainy at noon and cloudy in the afternoon.
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The sky became blue, and sun showed up from time to time.
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Weather forecast said that it wouldn't rain again, so I decided to visit Auntie De.
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It had been three weeks that I didn't visit her. It had been three weeks |
The main road was still in maintenance, so it was a bit rugged. The main road was still undergoing maintenance, so it was a bit rugged. I think "rough" or "uneven" would be better than "rugged" here. |
I had to ride my bike slowly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
When I arrived, Auntie De was going to her fields. When I arrived, Auntie De was about to go in |
She advised me to stay in her house, but I refuesd and told her that I wanted to go with her. She advised me to stay in the |
I wore her shoet rain boots which was so soft to me that I could feel the stones. I wore her |
But I could withstand it, because I wanted to go for a walk in the fields. But I could |
After raining, the air was fresh and the plants were so green which made me very pleasant. After the rain |
When we passed some house, a woman asked Auntie De "why the girl sivit you so frequent?" When we passed someone's house, a woman asked Auntie De, "why |
"She is just a friend." "She is just a friend |
answered Auntie De. |
Then she told the woman that who my father was because there were a lot people knew my father in town. Then she told the woman |
I was a little surprised while I heard the word "friend". I was a little surprised while I heard the word "friend |
People in town hardly use the word when they are much older than you. People |
Because of the continuous raining, all the fields were full of water. Because of the continuous rain |
She told me her fields. She told me her fields. not sure what you're trying to say here, but this sentence is not grammatically correct |
I counted that she had five piece of fields.
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The rice grew well but was a bit sparse. |
“Have you ever transplanted?" “Have you ever transplanted plants from one location to another?" I added a little bit extra context because the word "transplant" to a normal American English speaker almost always refers to an organ transplant, not moving a plant from one location to another. 你想说 “移植” 对吗?我查了我的词典,在中文里 “移植” 可以用来说秧苗和树木,但是英语里,我们只会说 transplant 器官,不会说 transplant 植物。 |
asked Auntie De surprisedly. asked Auntie De, with surprise |
I told her that I had experienced all the farm work when I was a child. I told her that I |
Auntie De dug a little mud away from the ridge to drain the water in her first field. |
Then we walked on the ridge of canal. Then we walked along the ridge of canal. |
The water inside was pretty linpid though there was much sand under it. The water inside was pretty |
I saw many small fish swimming happily. I saw |
I took some pictures delightedly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
After dinner, we went to the center together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I rode my bike while she rode her electrical vehicle. I rode my bike while she rode her electric |
I had a good day today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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