Nov. 4, 2024
A Village Surrounded by Persimmon Trees
I went hiking again yesterday.
On our way to the trail start, the traffic was so heavy that we had to get off the bus early.
When hiking back to that area, I finally knew the reason why.
There was a beautiful small village surrounded by many persimmon trees. And those persimmons were ripening. The view of an antique village with persimmons on the trees was indeed a gorgeous picture. No wonder that many people went there to enjoy the local scenery and food.
You can see some photos here:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/X1NH6Uz0sexE7O5F49afUA.
昨天又去徒步了。
在去往路线起点的途中，交通太拥挤，我们不得不提前下车了。
当徒步回到那块区域时，我终于知道了原因。
那儿有一个美丽的小村庄，周围有许多柿子树，现在正是那些柿子成熟的时候。一个古老的村庄，衬着挂满柿子的树，确实是一幅美丽的图画。难怪许多人去那里享受当地的风景和食物。
你可以在这里看到一些照片：https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/X1NH6Uz0sexE7O5F49afUA。
I went hiking again yesterday.
On our way to the trail startentrance, the traffic was so heavy that we had to get off the bus early.
Nov. 7, 2024
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A Village Surrounded by Persimmon Trees
I went hiking again yesterday.
On our way to the trail startstart of the trail (or the foot of the trail), the traffic was so heavy that we had to get off the bus early.
When hiking back to that area, I finally knew the reason why.
You can also say "discovered" or "found out" instead of "knew".
There was a small, beautiful small village surrounded by many persimmon trees.
I corrected the order of these adjectives by instinct, but I think you can look up the proper ordering of adjectives for clearer information.
And those persimmons were ripening.
The view (or "sight", "image") of an antique village with persimmons growing on the trees was indeed a gorgeous picture.
No wonder that many people went there to enjoy the local scenery and food.
You can see some photos here:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/X1NH6Uz0sexE7O5F49afUA.
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Good job! Those persimmons look lovely. They must be delicious this time of year.
Nov. 5, 2024
Thank you so much!
They're really delicious. Many fresh persimmons are now sold in fruit shops across China. I wish I could share some with you all.
A Village Surrounded by Persimmon Trees
I went hiking again yesterday.
On our way to the trail starthead, the traffic was so heavy that we had to get off the bus early.
One way you can refer to the start of the trail is the "trailhead".
Whilen hiking back to that area, I finally knew the reason why.¶
or When I hiked back to that area, I finally knew the reason why.
"While" works better than "when" if you're talking about something that takes place over a duration of time.
There was a beautiful small village surrounded by many persimmon trees.
And those persimmons were ripening.
The view of an antique village with persimmons on the trees was indeed a gorgeous picture.
No wonder that many people went there to enjoy the local scenery and food.
You can see some photos here: https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/X1NH6Uz0sexE7O5F49afUA.
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Your writing is lovely and so are the photos! I wish I could be there to see the trees. It also made me want to eat persimmons :)
Nov. 4, 2024
Thank you so much!
I didn't have time to buy persimmons in the village yesterday. But I bought a box of them from a fruit shop tonight. They are so sweet and juicy. It would be great if I could share some with you.
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