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Tammy

July 29, 2024

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A video of my pet fish

I made a video of my pet fish A Cai the weekend before last when it's been in my home for a month.

Then I got a little busy, so I had no time to upload the video and add captions.

Now you can see it here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdhYVCBWd7g.

Hope you like it, and if there are any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.


上上个周末,我给我的宠物鱼阿彩做了一个视频,当时它来我家里已经满一个月了。

然后有点忙,所以没有时间上传视频并添加字幕。

现在你可以在这里看到啦:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdhYVCBWd7g。

希望你喜欢它,如果对字幕有任何建议,请随时告诉我。

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A video of my pet fish

Last weekend, I made a video of my pet fish A Cai the weekend before last when. At the time, it'sd been in my home for a full month.

Then I got a little busy, so I had no time to upload the video and add captions.

Now you can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdhYVCBWd7g.

Hope you like it, and if there are any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.

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Tammy

July 30, 2024

3

Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

I made a video of my pet fish, A Ccai, the weekend before last when it's been in my home for a month.

I assumed that Acai is the name of your pet. Please, let me know if this is correct or if you means something different.

Then I got a little busy, so I had nodidn't have time to upload the video and add captions.

This phrasing feels more natural to me.

Now you can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdhYVCBWd7g.

I added a space between ":" and the URL so it is easier to read.

Hope you like it, and if there aryou have any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.

I feel like this wording is more natural.

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Tammy

July 29, 2024

3

Thanks for your corrections and Feedback!

Yes A Cai is my fish's name. It's the pronunciation of 阿彩, which means colorful in Chinese.

A video of my pet fish


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I made a video of my pet fish A Cai the weekend before last when it's been in my home for a month.


I made a video of my pet fish, A Ccai, the weekend before last when it's been in my home for a month.

I assumed that Acai is the name of your pet. Please, let me know if this is correct or if you means something different.

Last weekend, I made a video of my pet fish A Cai the weekend before last when. At the time, it'sd been in my home for a full month.

Then I got a little busy, so I had no time to upload the video and add captions.


Then I got a little busy, so I had nodidn't have time to upload the video and add captions.

This phrasing feels more natural to me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now you can see it here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdhYVCBWd7g.


Now you can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdhYVCBWd7g.

I added a space between ":" and the URL so it is easier to read.

Now you can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdhYVCBWd7g.

Hope you like it, and if there are any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.


Hope you like it, and if there aryou have any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.

I feel like this wording is more natural.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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