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Tammy

Sept. 14, 2024

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A Video of Birds

I'm so excited to share this video with you folks: https://youtu.be/r3np72jPyXY

I was packing my luggage this afternoon. Suddenly I heard some bird on my window again. I put down the clothes I was packing and quickly set up my camera outside the window.

And then I finally captured a video of the birds outside my window.

But this time they were sparrows, not the ones I had seen last time.

And it took a long time for them to return since I put the camera there.

Anyway, I'm so happy to have a video of them finally.


鸟儿视频


好激动啊能和大家分享这个视频:https://youtu.be/r3np72jPyXY

今天下午我正收拾行李。突然又听到有鸟儿在我的窗户边的声音。我赶紧放下正打包的衣服,迅速把相机放到窗外。

然后我终于拍到了窗外鸟儿的视频。

但这次它们是麻雀,不是我上次看到的那些。

而且我放好相机后,他们花了很长时间才回来。

不管咋样,好高兴终于拍到它们了。

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A Video of BirdsLSO POSSIBLE: A Bird Video

更加顺畅: While packing some luggage this afternoon, I made this short video and I'm so excited to share ithis video with you folks: https://youtu.be/r3np72jPyXY

I was packing my luggage this afternoon.

Suddenly I heard some bird ons at my window again.

I put down the clothes I was packing and quickly set up mya camera outside themy window.

And tThen, I finally captured athis video of the birds outside my window.

But this time tThey were sparrows, and not the ones I had seen last time(that) I had previously seen.

And it took a long time for them to return since I put the camera there.

Anyway, I'm so happy to have a video of them finally.

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Thanks for sharing this! They were cute. Did you did the "Tick Tok" video editing program?

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Tammy

Sept. 15, 2024

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Thanks a lot!

I used the same program I told you last time.

A Video of Birds

I'm so excited to share this video with you folks: https://youtu.be/r3np72jPyXY I was packing my luggage this afternoon.

Suddenly, I heard some birds on my window again.

the noun next to 'some' should be in plural form.

But this time they were sparrows, not the ones I had seen last time.

Anyway, I'm so happy to have a video of them finally.

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I didn't know birds eat plants 😮

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Tammy

Sept. 15, 2024

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谢谢!

很有趣对吧?我以前也不晓得它们是在吃草。

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Toluwani

Sept. 15, 2024

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对啊,我学了新知识o( ̄▽ ̄)d

I'm so excited to share this video with you folks: https://youtu.be/r3np72jPyXY I was packing my luggage this afternoon.

Suddenly I heard some bird on my window again.

I put down the clothes I was packing and quickly set up my camera outside the window.

And then I finally captured a video of the birds outside my window.

But this time they were sparrows, not the ones I had seen last time.

And it took a long time for them to return since I had put the camera there.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Sept. 15, 2024

1

Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

But this time they were sparrows, not the ones I had seen last time.


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And it took a long time for them to return since I put the camera there.


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Anyway, I'm so happy to have a video of them finally.


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A Video of Birds


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A Video of BirdsLSO POSSIBLE: A Bird Video

I'm so excited to share this video with you folks: https://youtu.be/r3np72jPyXY I was packing my luggage this afternoon.


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更加顺畅: While packing some luggage this afternoon, I made this short video and I'm so excited to share ithis video with you folks: https://youtu.be/r3np72jPyXY

I was packing my luggage this afternoon.

Suddenly I heard some bird on my window again.


Suddenly, I heard some birds on my window again.

the noun next to 'some' should be in plural form.

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Suddenly I heard some bird ons at my window again.

I put down the clothes I was packing and quickly set up my camera outside the window.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I put down the clothes I was packing and quickly set up mya camera outside themy window.

And then I finally captured a video of the birds outside my window.


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And tThen, I finally captured athis video of the birds outside my window.

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