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A video
I watched a video today on twitter.
It's contents was, a women was having a boad and stand front of a car, and the boad was written that "TOPLESS CARWASH."
The driver was laughing out loud and paid some money.
Then, two man appeared and started washing the car.
The driver and other people in the car laughed histerically.
I laughed too while watching the video.
Anybody didn't lie, but I think it was so funny.
A video
I watched a video today on tTwitter.
"Twitter" is the name of a company/service, and is hence a proper noun. It should be capitalised.
It's contents was, a womean was havingith a board andwas standing in front of a car, and on the board it was written that "TOPLESS CARWASH.".
(1) "It's" is the contraction of "it is". "Its" is the possessive you're looking for.
(2) It should be "content" and not "contents", because the content of videos is uncountable.
(3) "Women" is plural, while "woman" is singular.
(4) The period should be placed outside the quotation marks, unless it was also part of the text that was written on the board.
(5) Overall, I made some adjustments to the sentence structure so that it sounds more natural. Do take some time to look over them.
The driver was laughing out loud and paid some money.
Then, two man appeared and started washing the car.
The driver and (the) other people in the car laughed hiysterically.
A suggestion, just for your information: Instead of "other people", you can also write "other passengers".
I laughed too while watching the video.
AnyNobody didn't lied, but I thinkought it was so funny.
I watched a video today on tTwitter.
"Twitter" has to be capitalized because it's a proper noun.
It's contents was, a women was having a board and stand in front of a car, and the board was written thatd "TOPLESS CARWASH." written on it.
The driver and other people in the car laughed hiysterically.
I laughed too, while watching the video.
Anybody didn't lie, but I think it was so funny.
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I watched a video today on twitter. I watched a video today on "Twitter" has to be capitalized because it's a proper noun. I watched a video today on "Twitter" is the name of a company/service, and is hence a proper noun. It should be capitalised. |
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It's contents was, a women was having a boad and stand front of a car, and the boad was written that "TOPLESS CARWASH." It's content It (1) "It's" is the contraction of "it is". "Its" is the possessive you're looking for. (2) It should be "content" and not "contents", because the content of videos is uncountable. (3) "Women" is plural, while "woman" is singular. (4) The period should be placed outside the quotation marks, unless it was also part of the text that was written on the board. (5) Overall, I made some adjustments to the sentence structure so that it sounds more natural. Do take some time to look over them. |
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The driver was laughing out loud and paid some money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The driver and other people in the car laughed histerically. The driver and other people in the car laughed h The driver and (the) other people in the car laughed h A suggestion, just for your information: Instead of "other people", you can also write "other passengers". |
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I laughed too while watching the video. I laughed too, while watching the video. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then, two man appeared and started washing the car. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anybody didn't lie, but I think it was so funny. Anybody didn't lie, but I think it was so funny.
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Then, two man appeared and started washing car. |
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Anybody don't lie, but I think it was so funny. |
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