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A valgar song

Kids these days like to sing a valgar song. They always love to say dirty jokes. It's problem. A parody song called "森のクマさん" is becoming popular. In English title is " The other day I met a bear". Recently, kids have a tendency not to read a published books. Instead of it they watch YouTube or tick-tock. They have loose regulations more than published books.

Sadly, the more social media become popular, the more children become valgar.

However, I took a look the YouTube video just in case. It made me laugh. That 's hilarious!


下品な歌

最近の子供たちは下品な歌が大好き。いつも下品な冗談を言ってる。これは問題です。「森のクマさん」のパロディが最近の流行です。英語だと"The other day I met a bear".といいます。
最近の子供たちは本を読む代わりに、youtubeとか TikTokを見ています。そういうのは出版された本より規制がゆるいので、SNSが流行れば流行るほど、子供たちは下品になっていきます。

しかし、念のためちょっと見てみたら、面白かった。爆笑してしまいました。

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 va vulgar song

Kids these days like to sing a vaulgar song.

They always love to saytell dirty jokes.

It's a problem.

A parody song called "森のクマさん" is becoming popular.

In English title is " The other day I met a bear".

Recently, kids have a tendency not to read a published books.

Instead of it they watch YouTube or tick-tocTikTok.

They have looser regulations more than published books.

Sadly, the more popular social media become populars, the more children become vaulgar.

However, I took a look the YouTube video just in case.

It made me laugh.

That It's hilarious!

 va vulgar song

Kids these days like to sing a vavulgar songs.

They always love to saytell dirty jokes.

It's a problem.

A parody song called "森のクマさん" is becoming popular.

In English, the title is " The other day I met a bear".

Recently, kids have a tendencyd not to read a published books.

Instead of it, they watch YouTube or tick-tocTikTok.

TheyYouTube and TikTok have looser regulations more than publishedules than books.

Sadly, the more social media becomes popular, the more children become vaulgar.

However, I took a look at the YouTube video just in casefor fun.

It made me laugh.

That 'It was hilarious!

A vaA vulgar song

Kids these days like to sing a vavulgar songs.

They alwayso love to say dirty jokes.

It'sWhich is a problem.

A parody song called "森のクマさん" is becoming popular.

good, but how is this connected to the previous sentence?

In English, the title is " The other day I met a bear".

Recently, kids have athe tendency not to read a published books.

Instead of it, they watch YouTube or tick-tock.k

TheyWhich have loose regulations mocompared thano published books.

Sadly, the more that social media becomes popular, the more that children become vaulgar.

However, I took a look the YouTube video just in casto see.

That 'It was hilarious!

Feedback

very good!!

A vaA vulgar song

Kids these days like to sing a vavulgar songs.

They always love to saytell dirty jokes.

In English, you don't say a joke, you tell it.

It's a problem.

Two options:
"It's a problem" or "It's problematic"

In English, the title is " The oOther dDay I mMet a bBear".

Recently, kids have a tendency to not to read a published books.

Instead of it, they watch YouTube or tick-tocTik-Tok.

They have looser regulations more than published books.

Sadly, the more popular social media become populars, the more vulgar children become valgar.

However, I tlook a looked at the YouTube video just in case.

That It's hilarious!

Feedback

Great job!

A vaA Vulgar sSong

spelling and spacing

Kids these days like to sing a vaulgar song.

They always love to say dirty jokes.

It's a problem.

we need an article here

InThe English title is " The other day I met a bear".

Recently, kids have a tendency to not to read a publisheread books.

Instead of it, they watch YouTube or tick-tocTik-Tok.

Theyose platforms have looser regulations more than published books.

Sadly, the more social media becomes popular, the more children become vaulgar.

However, I tlook a looked at the YouTube video just in case.

What video? Which one?

That It's hilarious!

Feedback

This is a little bit disconnected but it's good to write about topics you have strong feelings about.

A vaA vulgar song

You've used a tab here instead of a space between "a" and "vulgar"

Kids these days like to sing a vaulgar song.

They always love to saytell dirty jokes.

This is correct, but usually we "tell jokes", we don't "say them".

It's a problem.

In English title is " The other day I met a bear".

Recently, kids have a tendency not to read a published books.

Instead of it they watch YouTube or tick-tock.

They have looser regulations moreules than published books.

I'm not sure that this means what you intend. This sentence suggests that there are people approving/rejecting books and that they enforce some rules/regulations.

If this is not the case, you might want to say something like this:

They are often more crude than published books.

Sadly, the more popular social media become populars, the more children become vaulgar.

That It's hilarious!

Feedback

You've used the term vulgar a lot. Some synonyms for this word are crude, impolite, indecent, or obscene. Nice job!

Kids these days like to sing a valgar song.


Kids these days like to sing a vaulgar song.

Kids these days like to sing a vaulgar song.

Kids these days like to sing a vavulgar songs.

Kids these days like to sing a vavulgar songs.

Kids these days like to sing a vavulgar songs.

Kids these days like to sing a vaulgar song.

They always love to say dirty jokes.


They always love to saytell dirty jokes.

This is correct, but usually we "tell jokes", we don't "say them".

They always love to say dirty jokes.

They always love to saytell dirty jokes.

In English, you don't say a joke, you tell it.

They alwayso love to say dirty jokes.

They always love to saytell dirty jokes.

They always love to saytell dirty jokes.

It's problem.


It's a problem.

It's a problem.

we need an article here

It's a problem.

Two options: "It's a problem" or "It's problematic"

It'sWhich is a problem.

It's a problem.

It's a problem.

A parody song called "森のクマさん" is becoming popular.


A parody song called "森のクマさん" is becoming popular.

good, but how is this connected to the previous sentence?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sadly, the more social media become popular, the more children become valgar.


Sadly, the more popular social media become populars, the more children become vaulgar.

Sadly, the more social media becomes popular, the more children become vaulgar.

Sadly, the more popular social media become populars, the more vulgar children become valgar.

Sadly, the more that social media becomes popular, the more that children become vaulgar.

Sadly, the more social media becomes popular, the more children become vaulgar.

Sadly, the more popular social media become populars, the more children become vaulgar.

However, I took a look the YouTube video just in case.


However, I tlook a looked at the YouTube video just in case.

What video? Which one?

However, I tlook a looked at the YouTube video just in case.

However, I took a look the YouTube video just in casto see.

However, I took a look at the YouTube video just in casefor fun.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It made me laugh.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That 's hilarious!


That It's hilarious!

That It's hilarious!

That It's hilarious!

That 'It was hilarious!

That 'It was hilarious!

That It's hilarious!

A valgar song


A vaA vulgar song

You've used a tab here instead of a space between "a" and "vulgar"

A vaA Vulgar sSong

spelling and spacing

A vaA vulgar song

A vaA vulgar song

 va vulgar song

 va vulgar song

They have loose regulations more than published books.


They have looser regulations moreules than published books.

I'm not sure that this means what you intend. This sentence suggests that there are people approving/rejecting books and that they enforce some rules/regulations. If this is not the case, you might want to say something like this: They are often more crude than published books.

Theyose platforms have looser regulations more than published books.

They have looser regulations more than published books.

TheyWhich have loose regulations mocompared thano published books.

TheyYouTube and TikTok have looser regulations more than publishedules than books.

They have looser regulations more than published books.

In English title is " The other day I met a bear".


In English title is " The other day I met a bear".

InThe English title is " The other day I met a bear".

In English, the title is " The oOther dDay I mMet a bBear".

In English, the title is " The other day I met a bear".

In English, the title is " The other day I met a bear".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Recently, kids have a tendency not to read a published books.


Recently, kids have a tendency not to read a published books.

Recently, kids have a tendency to not to read a publisheread books.

Recently, kids have a tendency to not to read a published books.

Recently, kids have athe tendency not to read a published books.

Recently, kids have a tendencyd not to read a published books.

Recently, kids have a tendency not to read a published books.

Instead of it they watch YouTube or tick-tock.


Instead of it they watch YouTube or tick-tock.

Instead of it, they watch YouTube or tick-tocTik-Tok.

Instead of it, they watch YouTube or tick-tocTik-Tok.

Instead of it, they watch YouTube or tick-tock.k

Instead of it, they watch YouTube or tick-tocTikTok.

Instead of it they watch YouTube or tick-tocTikTok.

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