Sept. 9, 2022
This is a true story. Years ago, I worked in a secondary vocational school. One year, my school recruited a class of formal secondary specialized students, and five female students in the class. For some reason, there were about five informal students studying in the class. Formal students had very good performance in their academic grades, but the informal students didn't, and really sucked.
One year later, in a casual conversation with the head teacher of the class, I learned that a few female students were dating some informal students. I asked the teacher if the female students had ever dated those formal students, and he said no. I got confused because I guessed that the formal female students should date the formal students instead of the informal students, but the fact was totally opposite.
In real life, we can see many of these kinds of situations. We often see from TV shows that a few very good ladies fighting for a jerk who is not handsome, no money, no status, no good manners, but the only thing he is very good at is to cheat women, to win the favor of women.
I once thought, If I were a lady, would I act the same way?
Formal students had very good performance in their academic grades, but the informal students didn't, and really sucketheir performance was quite bad.
I was a bit surprised to see you use the word "sucked" because your writing felt quite polite and formal, and sucked is somewhat rude. It's not very rude, but I just don't think it fits the tone of what you're writing.
A True Story
This is a true story.
Years ago, I worked in a secondary vocational school.
One year, my school recruited a class of formal secondary specialized secondary students, and there were five female students in the class.
For some reason, there were about five informal students studying in the class.
Formal students hadgave very good academic performance in their academics by getting good grades, but the informal students didn't, and really sucked.
OneA year later, in a casual conversation with the head teacher of the class, I learned that a few of the female students were dating some informal students.
I asked the teacher if the female students had ever dated those formal students, and he said, no.
I got confused because I would've guessed that the formal female students shwould've dated the formal students instead of the informal students, but the facit was totally oppositthe reverse.
When we guess or assume something, we use the subjunctive case. This is tricky and worth looking up.
In real life, we can see many of these kinds of situations.
We often see from TV shows that a few very goohen we watch TV shows, we often see well-mannered ladies fighting fover a jerk who is not handsome, has no money, no status, no good manners, butwhile the only thing he is very good at is to cheating on women, to win the favor of women.
We're not all like this!
I know what you mean but I had trouble thinking of substitutes for "a few very good ladies."
Here are my attempts:
well-bred
pretty
beautiful
educated
I once thought, If I were a lady, would I act the same way?
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gee, I hope not! I'm not happy with how things turned out but you described a very good story!
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Years ago, I worked in a secondary vocational school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
One year, my school recruited a class of formal secondary specialized students, and five female students in the class. One year, my school recruited a class of formal |
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Formal students had very good performance in their academic grades, but the informal students didn't, and really sucked. Formal students Formal students had very good performance in their academic grades, but the informal students didn't, I was a bit surprised to see you use the word "sucked" because your writing felt quite polite and formal, and sucked is somewhat rude. It's not very rude, but I just don't think it fits the tone of what you're writing. |
One year later, in a casual conversation with the head teacher of the class, I learned that a few female students were dating some informal students.
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I asked the teacher if the female students had ever dated those formal students, and he said no. I asked the teacher if the female students had ever dated th |
I got confused because I guessed that the formal female students should date the formal students instead of the informal students, but the fact was totally opposite. I got confused because I would've guessed that the formal female students When we guess or assume something, we use the subjunctive case. This is tricky and worth looking up. |
In real life, we can see many of these kinds of situations. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
We often see from TV shows that a few very good ladies fighting for a jerk who is not handsome, no money, no status, no good manners, but the only thing he is very good at is to cheat women, to win the favor of women. W We're not all like this! I know what you mean but I had trouble thinking of substitutes for "a few very good ladies." Here are my attempts: well-bred pretty beautiful educated |
I once thought, If I were a lady, would I act the same way? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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