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Sept. 22, 2021

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A trip by train

Some years ago, when I was young, I done a travel to Hastings by train to see this famous battlefield in the south of england. When I went down i the station, I still remember a pleasant smell of the air to humid ground. Now, when I smell something similar, I always remember that trip to Hasting.

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A trip by train

Some years ago, when I was young, I done a traveled to Hastings by train to see this famous battlefield in the sSouth of eEngland.

When I went down into the station, I still rememberthe air had a pleasant smell ofrom the air to humiddamp ground.

This sentence had mixed tenses.
Humid is usually only used to describe air. Damp means wet but not soaked.

Now, whenever I smell something similar, I always remember that trip to Hastings.

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A trip by train


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Some years ago, when I was young, I done a travel to Hastings by train to see this famous battlefield in the south of england.


Some years ago, when I was young, I done a traveled to Hastings by train to see this famous battlefield in the sSouth of eEngland.

When I went down i the station, I still remember a pleasant smell of the air to humid ground.


When I went down into the station, I still rememberthe air had a pleasant smell ofrom the air to humiddamp ground.

This sentence had mixed tenses. Humid is usually only used to describe air. Damp means wet but not soaked.

Now, when I smell something similar, I always remember that trip to Hasting.


Now, whenever I smell something similar, I always remember that trip to Hastings.

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