Last week, I went to Suzhou, part of the "Suhang" region in China.

To give context to the following sentence.

In China, there i's a word saidsaying: "There is a heaven abow,ve and Suhang below."

谚语 = saying

It's beauty lies not only aboutin it's scenery, and but also in it's climate, architecture, food, and so on.

It's = it is, 它的 = its

So I decided to walk through the alleys where there are still pristine and those tourist rarely gothat remain pristine and where few tourists venture/pass.

Improved clarity and flow.

I just go, walked on the green brick road, passing by people's doors.

Fixed tense consistency

See, seeing them cooking, chatting, and spending time together.

Connect with the previous sentence.

Then I left the houses behind.

You can also use the word "residential district"

I crossed the bridge and the road, with a park ain front of me.

There are a rows of willow trees along the river.

a/an is for singular nouns

Willow branches hang low into the river, and dancinge in the wind.

Verb tense consistency

It smells here and there, paws hereniffed, pawed, and scratchesd here and there.

With aThe flow of black inamidst those greens has madecreated an intersesting visual impact.

I just walk, walked and walked until the time doesidn't make any sense anymore.

You can also say "until time lost all meaning"