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April 10, 2023

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A trial English lesson plan

How do you present to your foreign clients for the first meeting?
Scenario: Meeting clients for the first time
Goal:
1 Got more familiar with this scene
2 Got more familiar with the introduction of company and product
3 Got more familiar with new vocabulary and expressions
4 Learn more about presentation skills
Presentation:
1 Greeting: Good morning, everyone.
2 Name + Position:  My name is Billy and I’m the head of international sales department at Huawei. 
3 The goal of the presentation: I am delighted to have the opportunity to introduce our company and give you an overview of what we do.
4 Company introduction: First of all, let me start by telling you some background information about our company. Huawei was founded in 1987 and we specialize in designing and manufacturing mobile phones. We are headquartered in Shenzhen and have over 1000 employees. has been ever since.
5 Products introduction: Now, let me give you a brief overview of our products. We offer a wide range of products, including mobile phones and digital devices. We are committed to providing high-quality products to customers around the world. And with over 36 years’ experience, we have established long-term partnerships with many suppliers, allowing us to offer our products at lower prices.
6 Service: In addition to high-quality products and lower prices, we also provide excellent customer service, and we are always available to answer any questions that you may have.
7 Conclusion: In conclusion, we believe that Huawei is the perfect partner for your business needs. We offer high-quality products and services at competitive prices, and our experienced team is dedicated to providing excellent customer service. Thank you for your time, and we look forward to the opportunity to work with you in the future.
8 Q&A: If you have any questions , please feel free to ask.

Corrections

How do you give a presentation to your foreign clients for theon your first meeting?

Scenario: Meeting clients for the first time

Goals:

Since there are several goals, you need the plural

1 Goet more familiar with thise scene

Got is past tense, here you want the imperative since you are giving instructions

2 Goet more familiar with the introduction of the company and the products

3 Got more familiar withLearn new vocabulary and expressions

4 Learn more about presentational skills

Presentation:

1 Greeting: Good morning, everyone.

2 Name + Position:  My name is Billy and I’m the head of the international sales department at Huawei.

3 The goal of the presentation: I am delighted to have the opportunity to introduce our company and give you an overview ofgive you a brief overview of our company and to tell you what we do here.

4 Company introduction: First of all, let me start by telling you some background information about our company.

We are headquartered in Shenzhen and have over 1000 employees.

has been ever since.

Is this sentence complete?

5 PIntroducts intion of the productions: Now, let me give you a brief overview of our products line.

We offer a wide range of products, including mobile phones and other digital devices.

We are committed to providing high-quality products to customers around the world.

And with over 36 years of experience, we have established long-term partnerships with many suppliers, allowing us to offer our products at lower prices.

Lower = comparing with something else eg. He has lower grades than her. Since you are not comparing the prices to other companies I’d use low

6 Service: In addition to high-quality products and lower prices, we also provide excellent customer service, and we are always available to answer any questions that you may have.

7 Conclusion: In conclusion, we believe that Huawei is the perfect partner for your business needs.

We offer high-quality products and services at competitive prices, and our experienced team is dedicated to providing an excellent customer serviexperience.

Thank you for your time, and we look forward to the opportunity to work with you in the future.

8 Q&A: If you have any questions , please feel free to ask.

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echoooo

April 11, 2023

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Thank you Vill for ur kind help!

A trial English lesson plan


How do you present to your foreign clients for the first meeting?


How do you give a presentation to your foreign clients for theon your first meeting?

Scenario: Meeting clients for the first time


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Goal:


Goals:

Since there are several goals, you need the plural

1 Got more familiar with this scene


1 Goet more familiar with thise scene

Got is past tense, here you want the imperative since you are giving instructions

2 Got more familiar with the introduction of company and product


2 Goet more familiar with the introduction of the company and the products

3 Got more familiar with new vocabulary and expressions


3 Got more familiar withLearn new vocabulary and expressions

4 Learn more about presentation skills


4 Learn more about presentational skills

1 Greeting: Good morning, everyone.


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2 Name + Position:  My name is Billy and I’m the head of international sales department at Huawei.


2 Name + Position:  My name is Billy and I’m the head of the international sales department at Huawei.

3 The goal of the presentation: I am delighted to have the opportunity to introduce our company and give you an overview of what we do.


3 The goal of the presentation: I am delighted to have the opportunity to introduce our company and give you an overview ofgive you a brief overview of our company and to tell you what we do here.

4 Company introduction: First of all, let me start by telling you some background information about our company.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Huawei was founded in 1987 and we specialize in designing and manufacturing mobile phones.


We are headquartered in Shenzhen and have over 1000 employees.


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has been ever since.


has been ever since.

Is this sentence complete?

5 Products introduction: Now, let me give you a brief overview of our products.


5 PIntroducts intion of the productions: Now, let me give you a brief overview of our products line.

We offer a wide range of products, including mobile phones and digital devices.


We offer a wide range of products, including mobile phones and other digital devices.

We are committed to providing high-quality products to customers around the world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And with over 36 years’ experience, we have established long-term partnerships with many suppliers, allowing us to offer our products at lower prices.


And with over 36 years of experience, we have established long-term partnerships with many suppliers, allowing us to offer our products at lower prices.

Lower = comparing with something else eg. He has lower grades than her. Since you are not comparing the prices to other companies I’d use low

6 Service: In addition to high-quality products and lower prices, we also provide excellent customer service, and we are always available to answer any questions that you may have.


6 Service: In addition to high-quality products and lower prices, we also provide excellent customer service, and we are always available to answer any questions that you may have.

7 Conclusion: In conclusion, we believe that Huawei is the perfect partner for your business needs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We offer high-quality products and services at competitive prices, and our experienced team is dedicated to providing excellent customer service.


We offer high-quality products and services at competitive prices, and our experienced team is dedicated to providing an excellent customer serviexperience.

Thank you for your time, and we look forward to the opportunity to work with you in the future.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

8 Q&A: If you have any questions , please feel free to ask.


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Presentation:


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