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steventart

Oct. 7, 2020

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A total flop

I used to be a dabbler; I took up baking for few weeks then I just got bored and started something different. But now I think back, it seemed that I was quite diffident that if I came up against a brick wall, I would simply go blank and give up in the end. If i recall, when I was 11, I needed to learn know how to weave a doll, my teacher showed the way to weaving it to perfection. I was lost for words but when I picked up my own needle, I did not even know what to do, feeling a bit ashamed of myself I pretended I was working hard on it. When the lesson ended, everyone brought their dolls back home, except for me.

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A tTotal fFlop

I used to be a dabbler; I took up baking for few weeks and then I just got bored and started something different.

But now I thinking back now, it seemeds that I was quite diffident that i. If I came up against a brick wall, I would simply go blank and give up in the end.

If iI recall correctly, when I was 11, I needed to learn know how to weave a doll, and my teacher showed the way to weavinge it to perfection.

I was at a losts for words, but when I picked up my own needle, I did non't even know what to do, f! Feeling a bit ashamed of myself, I pretended I was working hard on it.

When the lesson ended, everyone except for me brought their dolls back home, except for me.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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steventart

Oct. 10, 2020

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Thanks so much!

A tTotal fFlop

I used to be a dabbler; I took up baking for a few weeks, then I just got bored and started something different.

But now that I think back on it, it seemed that I was quite diffident that, so if I came up against a brick wall, I would simply go blank and give up in the end.

If i recall, when I was 11When I was 11, if I recall correctly, I needed to learn know how to weave a doll, and my teacher showed the wayme how to weavinge it to perfectionly.

I wasat such a losts for words buthat when I picked up my own needle, I did not even know what to do,. I feelingt a bit ashamed of myself, and I pretended I was working hard on it.

When the lesson ended, everyone brought their dolls back home, except for me.

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Good job! I recommend shortening your sentences a little bit so that the punctuation is not as complicated.

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steventart

Oct. 10, 2020

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Thank you!

A tTotal fFlop

Titles are generally capitalized.

I used to be a dabbler; I took up baking for few weeks then I just got bored and started something different.

But now that I think back, it seemed that I was quite diffident that i. If I came up against a brick wall, I would simply go blank and give up in the end.

Diffident is quite a rare word, I'm not sure I've ever heard someone say it.

If iI recall, when I was 11, I needed to learn know how to weave a doll, m. My teacher showed me the way to weavinge it to perfection.

I was lost for words but, and when I picked up my own needle, I did not even know what to do, f. Feeling a bit ashamed of myself I pretended I was working hard on it.

When the lesson ended, everyone brought their dolls back home, except for me.

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Nice work! I only had a few corrections to make.

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steventart

Oct. 10, 2020

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Thank you very much!

A total flop


A tTotal fFlop

Titles are generally capitalized.

A tTotal fFlop

A tTotal fFlop

I used to be a dabbler; I took up baking for few weeks then I just got bored and started something different.


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I used to be a dabbler; I took up baking for a few weeks, then I just got bored and started something different.

I used to be a dabbler; I took up baking for few weeks and then I just got bored and started something different.

But now I think back, it seemed that I was quite diffident that if I came up against a brick wall, I would simply go blank and give up in the end.


But now that I think back, it seemed that I was quite diffident that i. If I came up against a brick wall, I would simply go blank and give up in the end.

Diffident is quite a rare word, I'm not sure I've ever heard someone say it.

But now that I think back on it, it seemed that I was quite diffident that, so if I came up against a brick wall, I would simply go blank and give up in the end.

But now I thinking back now, it seemeds that I was quite diffident that i. If I came up against a brick wall, I would simply go blank and give up in the end.

If i recall, when I was 11, I needed to learn know how to weave a doll, my teacher showed the way to weaving it to perfection.


If iI recall, when I was 11, I needed to learn know how to weave a doll, m. My teacher showed me the way to weavinge it to perfection.

If i recall, when I was 11When I was 11, if I recall correctly, I needed to learn know how to weave a doll, and my teacher showed the wayme how to weavinge it to perfectionly.

If iI recall correctly, when I was 11, I needed to learn know how to weave a doll, and my teacher showed the way to weavinge it to perfection.

I was lost for words but when I picked up my own needle, I did not even know what to do, feeling a bit ashamed of myself I pretended I was working hard on it.


I was lost for words but, and when I picked up my own needle, I did not even know what to do, f. Feeling a bit ashamed of myself I pretended I was working hard on it.

I wasat such a losts for words buthat when I picked up my own needle, I did not even know what to do,. I feelingt a bit ashamed of myself, and I pretended I was working hard on it.

I was at a losts for words, but when I picked up my own needle, I did non't even know what to do, f! Feeling a bit ashamed of myself, I pretended I was working hard on it.

When the lesson ended, everyone brought their dolls back home, except for me.


When the lesson ended, everyone brought their dolls back home, except for me.

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When the lesson ended, everyone except for me brought their dolls back home, except for me.

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