Nov. 25, 2024
A Tiger Shark and a Tortorse
Yesterday, I saw a video clip in which a tiger shark help a sea tortoise ask for help from humans in a boat. From the clip, a shark push a tortoise approaching the boat, initially, the boat crew thought the shark was predating the tortoise. After a while, the crew members realized the shark was helping the tortoise asking humans cut the rope that circled its neck. In the end, the lucky tortoise was saved. Sea animals are actually more intelligent than we are expecting, living harmoniously is a wonderful thing for both wildlife and human beings.
昨天， 看了一个虎鲨帮助海龟向船员求助的视频片段。虎鲨将海龟推向小船， 开始，船员以为是虎鲨在不傻海龟。后来，船员们意识到这是虎鲨帮助海龟希望人类将它脖子上的绳子剪断。最后这个只幸运的海龟得救了。海洋动物比我们想象更聪明，人类与野生动物和谐生活是很美妙的事情。
A Tiger Shark and a Tortorise
Yesterday, I saw a video clip in which a tiger shark helps a sea tortoise to ask for help from humans in a boat.
From the clip, a shark push aes the tortoise towards the approaching the boat, and initially, the boat crew thought the shark was predatharming the tortoise.
After a while, the crew members realized the shark was helping the tortoise and asking the humans to cut the rope that circled it’s neck.
In the end, the lucky tortoise was saved.
Sea animals are actually more intelligent than we are expecting,alise and to livinge harmoniously is a wonderful thing for both wildlife and human beings.
Dec. 1, 2024
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A Tiger Shark and a Tortorise
Yesterday, I saw a video clip in which a tiger shark helped a sea tortoise ask for help from humans in a boat.
From the clip, athe shark push aed the tortoise approaching the boat, initially, the boat crew thought the shark was predatingnted to eat the tortoise.
After a while, the crew members realized the shark was helping the tortoise by asking humans to cut the rope that circled its neck.
In the end, the lucky tortoise was saved.
Sea animals are actually more intelligent than we are expectingknow, living harmoniously is a wonderful thing for both wildlife and human beings.
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What a nice Tiger shark 🦈
Nov. 25, 2024
But tortoise 🐢 have hard shells so they can't be easily killed.
Dec. 1, 2024
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A Tiger Shark and a Tourtorsle
Note: In English, we distinguish between turtles and tortoises. I don't think other languages do this though. Sea turtles are marine animals whilst tortoises exclusively live on land.
Yesterday, I saw a video clip in which a tiger shark helped a sea tourtoisele by asking for help from humans in a boat.
FromIn the clip, athe shark push aed the tourtoisle toward the approaching the boat, and initially, the boat crew thought the shark was predating the tortoise.
You can also break this into two sentences. so "In the clip, the shark pushed the turtle toward the approaching the boat. Initially, the boat crew thought the shark was predating on the tortoise."
ABut after a while, the crew members realized [that] the shark was helping the tourtoisele by asking the humans to cut the rope that circlearound its neck.
Starting the sentence with "but" helps to contrast the crew member's realization in this sentence with their initial thoughts in the previous one.
In the end, the lucky tourtoisle was saved.
Sea animals are actually more intelligent than we are expecting, l. Living harmoniously is a wonderful thing for both wildlife and human beings.
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Great job! Glad to hear that the sea turtle was rescued. It's fascinating what nature has to offer! I'd never expect to see a predator like a tiger shark help aid in the rescue of a prey animal like the sea turtle. Interesting thing to read!
Nov. 25, 2024
Thank you so much! I misused the tortoise and turtle.
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From the clip, a shark push a tortoise approaching the boat, initially, the boat crew thought the shark was predating the tortoise.
You can also break this into two sentences. so "In the clip, the shark pushed the turtle toward the approaching the boat. Initially, the boat crew thought the shark was predating on the tortoise." From the clip, From the clip, a shark push |
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After a while, the crew members realized the shark was helping the tortoise asking humans cut the rope that circled its neck.
Starting the sentence with "but" helps to contrast the crew member's realization in this sentence with their initial thoughts in the previous one. After a while, the crew members realized the shark was helping the tortoise by asking humans to cut the rope that circled its neck. After a while, the crew members realized the shark was helping the tortoise and asking the humans to cut the rope that circled it’s neck. |
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