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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 26, 2023

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A Talk with An Indian in Britain

Just 10 minutes ago, I finished a small conservation with an Indian middle-aged lady in Britain. Now, Id like to draw a small conclusion based on our talks. I don't know weather her words correct or wrong, I'd also to note I don't fact-checked on her statements or conduct any searches on the internet.

About 5% of local British people are identified as Christian, and the number of Christian have decreased. Proportion of Muslims, however, contribute around 4.4%, which is slightly lower than Christian community.
More Indians attend church compared to local people. The main factor probably due to the latter are concerning more on jobs for money, hence a lot of them have no time to pray in church.

As a Christian herself, the Indian lady often pray God help to convert more Muslims to Christianity.

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Now, I'd/I would like to draw a small conclusion based on our talks.

I don't know wheather her words were correct or wrong, I'd also to note I don'that I did not fact-checked on her statements or conduct any searches on the internet.

About 5% of local British people are identifiedy as Christian, and the number of Christians have decreased.

PThe proportion of Muslims, however, contributeis around 4.4%, which is slightly lower than Christian community.

The main factor is probably due to the latter are concerning more on jobs for money, hence a lot of them have no time to pray in church.

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 27, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections!

Just 10 minutes ago, I finished a small consvervsation with an Indian middle-aged lady inIndian lady who is from Britain.

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 26, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections!

A Talk with An Indian in Britain

Just 10 minutes ago, I finished a smallhort conservation with an Indian middle-aged Indian lady in Britain.

we usually use "short" or "long" when describing conversations. not "big" or "small"

Now, I'd like to drawmake a small conclusion based on our talksconversation.

I don't know weather her wordif what she said was correct or wrong,not, and I'd also like to note that I doidn't fact-checked on her statements or conduct any researches on the internet.

About 5% of local British people are identifiedy as Christian, and the number of Christians haves decreased.

PThe proportion of Muslims, however, contributemakes up around 4.4% of the total population, which is slightly lower than the Christian community.

More Indians attend church compared to local people.

The main factor probably due to the latter are concerning more on jobs for money, hence a lot of themat's probably because a lot of them are busy with work, so they don't have no time to pray in church.

As a Christian herself, the Indian lady often prayed to God to help to convert more Muslims to Christianity.

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 26, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! I have made a few mistakes regarding plurals. :-)

A Talk with An Indian in Britain

Or "Talking to/with..."

Just 10 minutes ago, I finishehad a small conservation with an Indian middle-aged Indian lady in Britain.

Now, I'd like to draw a small conclusion based on our talksconversation.

I don't know wheather her words correct or wrongare true or false, I'd also to note I doidn't fact-checked on her statements or conduct any searches on the internet.

or "I don't know whether what she said was right or wrong..."

About 5% of local British people are identifiedy as Christian, and the number of Christians haves decreased.

PThe proportion of Muslims, however, contributeis around 4.4%, which is slightly lower than Christian communitythe amount of Christians.

The main factor probably due tofor the latter are concernis focusing more on jobs forto earn money, hence a lot of them have no time to pray in church.

I think that is what you wanted to say?

As a Christian herself, the Indian lady often prays to God to help to convert more Muslims to Christianity.

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Great writing! :)

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 26, 2023

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The main factor probably due tofor the latter are concernis focusing more on jobs forto earn money, hence a lot of them have no time to pray in church.

These hypotheses were really from the lady.

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 26, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! I assumed the UK is a traditional Christian country, the proportion of Christians should be high, possibly around 60%.

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Grace14

Sept. 27, 2023

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Yes, I would say the most common religion is Christianity.

A Talk with An Indian in Britain


A Talk with An Indian in Britain

Or "Talking to/with..."

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Just 10 minutes ago, I finished a small conservation with an Indian middle-aged lady in Britain.


Just 10 minutes ago, I finishehad a small conservation with an Indian middle-aged Indian lady in Britain.

Just 10 minutes ago, I finished a smallhort conservation with an Indian middle-aged Indian lady in Britain.

we usually use "short" or "long" when describing conversations. not "big" or "small"

Just 10 minutes ago, I finished a small consvervsation with an Indian middle-aged lady inIndian lady who is from Britain.

Now, Id like to draw a small conclusion based on our talks.


Now, I'd like to draw a small conclusion based on our talksconversation.

Now, I'd like to drawmake a small conclusion based on our talksconversation.

Now, I'd/I would like to draw a small conclusion based on our talks.

I don't know weather her words correct or wrong, I'd also to note I don't fact-checked on her statements or conduct any searches on the internet.


I don't know wheather her words correct or wrongare true or false, I'd also to note I doidn't fact-checked on her statements or conduct any searches on the internet.

or "I don't know whether what she said was right or wrong..."

I don't know weather her wordif what she said was correct or wrong,not, and I'd also like to note that I doidn't fact-checked on her statements or conduct any researches on the internet.

I don't know wheather her words were correct or wrong, I'd also to note I don'that I did not fact-checked on her statements or conduct any searches on the internet.

About 5% of local British people are identified as Christian, and the number of Christian have decreased.


About 5% of local British people are identifiedy as Christian, and the number of Christians haves decreased.

About 5% of local British people are identifiedy as Christian, and the number of Christians haves decreased.

About 5% of local British people are identifiedy as Christian, and the number of Christians have decreased.

Proportion of Muslims, however, contribute around 4.4%, which is slightly lower than Christian community.


PThe proportion of Muslims, however, contributeis around 4.4%, which is slightly lower than Christian communitythe amount of Christians.

PThe proportion of Muslims, however, contributemakes up around 4.4% of the total population, which is slightly lower than the Christian community.

PThe proportion of Muslims, however, contributeis around 4.4%, which is slightly lower than Christian community.

More Indians attend church compared to local people.


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The main factor probably due to the latter are concerning more on jobs for money, hence a lot of them have no time to pray in church.


The main factor probably due tofor the latter are concernis focusing more on jobs forto earn money, hence a lot of them have no time to pray in church.

I think that is what you wanted to say?

The main factor probably due to the latter are concerning more on jobs for money, hence a lot of themat's probably because a lot of them are busy with work, so they don't have no time to pray in church.

The main factor is probably due to the latter are concerning more on jobs for money, hence a lot of them have no time to pray in church.

As a Christian herself, the Indian lady often pray God help to convert more Muslims to Christianity.


As a Christian herself, the Indian lady often prays to God to help to convert more Muslims to Christianity.

As a Christian herself, the Indian lady often prayed to God to help to convert more Muslims to Christianity.

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