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A swimmer try to go from Calvi to Monaco.

Here is a challenge for a good cause that could have been a disaster. Noam Yaron challenged himself to swim to Calvi until Monaco to make people and politics aware of the necessary preservation of the Mediterranean Sea and the protection of the biodiversity. He failed close to the end, at only two kilometers off the coast at Friday. This one who already tried this crazy challenge last year but had stopped at 100 kilometers, was almost successful but, after 5 days and 4 nights of non-stop swimming (he took some short naps lying down), his body and his head said « that’s enough ».
The fourth night has been complicated for Noam because of tiring, hallucinations, cold and burn, and cause of the impact of the salt on the body. The fifth day, Noam started to subit the consequences of the lack of sleep and was least and least concentrate.
He lose the sense of the reality, didn’t understand anymore that he should swim.


Voilà un défi pour la bonne cause qui aurait pu mal tourner. Alors qu’il s’était lancé le pari de faire Calvi-Monaco à la nage pour sensibiliser le grand public et les politiques sur la nécessité de préservation de la Méditerranée et la protection de la biodiversité, Noam Yaron a échoué tout près du but, à seulement deux kilomètres du rivage, vendredi. Celui qui avait déjà tenté ce défi fou l’an passé mais s’était arrêté au kilomètre 100, a bien failli réussir son exploit mais, après cinq jours et quatre nuits de nage non-stop (il faisait de mini-siestes allongé sur le dos), le corps et la tête on dit « basta ».

« La quatrième nuit a été compliquée pour Noam en raison de la fatigue, des hallucinations, du froid et des brûlures, et à cause de l’impact du sel sur le corps. Le cinquième jour, Noam a commencé à subir les conséquences du manque de sommeil et était de moins en moins concentré. Il perdait le fil de la réalité, ne comprenait plus qu’il devait nager. »

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A swimmer tryies to go from Calvi to Monaco.

HereThis is a challenge for a good cause that could have beended up a disaster.

Noam Yaron challenged himself to swim tofrom Calvi untilto Monaco to make people and politics aware of the necessary preservation of the Mediterranean Sea and the protection of the biodiversity.

He failed close to the end, at only two kilometers off the coast aton Friday.

This e persone who already tried this crazy challenge last year but had stopped at 100 kilometers, was almost successful but, after 5 days and 4 nights of non-stop swimming (he took some short naps lying down), his body and his head said « , "that’s enough »."

The fourth night hwas been complicated for Noam because of tiringexhaustion, hallucinations, coldhot and burn, and cause ofcold temperatures as well as the impact of the salt on the body.

TOn the fifth day, Noam started to subitexperience the consequences of thehis lack of sleep and was leastbecame less and leastss concentrated.

He lose thet his sense of the reality, and didn’t understand anymore that he should swim.

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He failed close to the end, at only two kilometers off the coast at Friday.


He failed close to the end, at only two kilometers off the coast aton Friday.

This one who already tried this crazy challenge last year but had stopped at 100 kilometers, was almost successful but, after 5 days and 4 nights of non-stop swimming (he took some short naps lying down), his body and his head said « that’s enough ».


This e persone who already tried this crazy challenge last year but had stopped at 100 kilometers, was almost successful but, after 5 days and 4 nights of non-stop swimming (he took some short naps lying down), his body and his head said « , "that’s enough »."

The fourth night has been complicated for Noam because of tiring, hallucinations, cold and burn, and cause of the impact of the salt on the body.


The fourth night hwas been complicated for Noam because of tiringexhaustion, hallucinations, coldhot and burn, and cause ofcold temperatures as well as the impact of the salt on the body.

The fifth day, Noam started to subit the consequences of the lack of sleep and was least and least concentrate.


TOn the fifth day, Noam started to subitexperience the consequences of thehis lack of sleep and was leastbecame less and leastss concentrated.

He lose the sense of the reality, didn’t understand anymore that he should swim.


He lose thet his sense of the reality, and didn’t understand anymore that he should swim.

A swimmer try to go from Calvi to Monaco.


A swimmer tryies to go from Calvi to Monaco.

Here is a challenge for a good cause that could have been a disaster.


HereThis is a challenge for a good cause that could have beended up a disaster.

Noam Yaron challenged himself to swim to Calvi until Monaco to make people and politics aware of the necessary preservation of the Mediterranean Sea and the protection of the biodiversity.


Noam Yaron challenged himself to swim tofrom Calvi untilto Monaco to make people and politics aware of the necessary preservation of the Mediterranean Sea and the protection of the biodiversity.

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