Jan. 19, 2023
A Story
There is a little boy who was born into a rich family. His parents bought him a lot of toys. One day, he and his father were going shopping and he found a transformer toy. He asked his father to buy it for him. His father said, “You have so many toys, and I have already bought you a very expensive transformer toy for 500 US dollars. Why do you still want this cheap one?” The little boy said, “because I have never played with this one.” Guys, did you get the moral of this story?
A Story
There iwas a little boy who was born into a rich family.
Stick to one tense
His parents bought him a lot of toys.
One day, he and his father were going shopping and he found a transformer toy.
He asked his father to buy it for him.
His father said, “You have so many toys, and I have already bought you a very expensive transformer toy for $500 US dollars.
$500 or 500 dollars is more natural. IF you want to emphasize that it is American dollars you can say '$500 USD'
"Why do you still want this cheap one?” The little boy said, “because I have never played with this one.” Guys, did you get the moral of this story?
Is the moral that it doesn't matter if a toy is cheap or expensive, kids just want new ones?
Jan. 20, 2023
"Why do you still want this cheap one?” The little boy said, “because I have never played with this one.” Guys, did you get the moral of this story?
I think the moral would be that humans are greedy. No matter how many toys they have and no matter whether the toys are expensive or not, they still want to try a new one.
Jan. 20, 2023
Thank you so much.
A Story
There iwas a little boy who was born into a rich family.
The rest of the narration is in past tense, so this should be past, too.
His parents bought him a lot of toys.
One day, he and his father were going shopping and he found a transformer toy.
He asked his father to buy it for him.
His father said, “You have so many toys, and I have already bought you a very expensive transformer toy for 500 US dollars.
Why do you still want this cheap one?” The little boy said, “bBecause I have never played with this one.” Guys, did you get the moral of this story?
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No, I don’t get it.
Jan. 20, 2023
I think the moral would be that humans are greedy. No matter how many toys they have and no matter whether the toys are expensive or not, they still want to try a new one. Thank you.
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His father said, “You have so many toys, and I have already bought you a very expensive transformer toy for 500 US dollars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! His father said, “You have so many toys, and I have already bought you a very expensive transformer toy for $500 $500 or 500 dollars is more natural. IF you want to emphasize that it is American dollars you can say '$500 USD' |
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Why do you still want this cheap one?” The little boy said, “because I have never played with this one.” Guys, did you get the moral of this story? Why do you still want this cheap one?” The little boy said, “ "Why do you still want this cheap one?” The little boy said, “because I have never played with this one.” Guys, did you get the moral of this story? Is the moral that it doesn't matter if a toy is cheap or expensive, kids just want new ones? |
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