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bb779

Feb. 15, 2020

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A story

Bob has missed a significant number of classes; consequently, the principal invites the truant to his office.

"How come you ’ve skipped so many classes?"

" You know, I've calculated my time and realized that I have no time for studies. I need to sleep eight hours a day, which is close to one hundred twenty-two days a year. Weekends take one hundred and four days a year , and summer holidays take around sixty days. I spend an hour at each meal; namely, that’s three hours a day or forty-five days a year. Also, I ’d need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds another thirty days. To sum it up, that's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school."
However, the principal proves Bob wrong.


The question is: What's wrong with Bob's calculations?

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A story

Bob has missed a significant number of classes; consequently, the principal invites the truant to his office.

"How come you’ve skipped so many classes?"

" You know, I've calculated my time and realized that I have no time for studies. I need to sleep eight hours a day, which is close to one hundred twenty-two days a year. Weekends take one hundred and four days a year. S, and summer holidays take around sixty days. I spend an hour at each meal. N; namely, that’s three hours a day or forty-five days a year. Also, I’d need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds another thirty days. To sum it up, that's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school."

However, the principal proves Bob wrong.

Don’t rely on the full stop too much, ‘and’ and comma’s are your friends too! (:

The question is: What's wrong with Bob's calculations?

A story

Bob has missed a significant number of classes,; consequently, the principal invites the truant to his office.

-"How come you have skipped so many classes?"

-"You know, I've calculated my days, thentime and realized, that I have no time for my studies.

I need to sleep eight hours a day, which is close to one hundred twenty-two days a year.

The question is: What's wrong with Bob's calculations?

Weekends take one hundred and four days a year.

Summer holidays take at around sixty days.

I spend everyan hour having aat each meal.

Namely, three hours a day or forty-five days a year.

Also, I need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds another thirty days.

To sum it up, ithat's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school.

However, the principal prooves that Bob isBob wrong.

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bb779

Feb. 16, 2020

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Thanks for corrections! I appreciate them.

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Bees

Feb. 17, 2020

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No problem!

-How come you skipped so many classes?


-"How come you have skipped so many classes?"

A story


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Bob has missed a significant number of classes, consequently, the principal invites the truant to his office.


Bob has missed a significant number of classes,; consequently, the principal invites the truant to his office.

-You know, I've calculated my days, then realized, I have no time for my studies.


-"You know, I've calculated my days, thentime and realized, that I have no time for my studies.

I need to sleep eight hours a day, which is close to one hundred twenty-two days a year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Weekends take one hundred and four days a year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Summer holidays take at around sixty days.


Summer holidays take at around sixty days.

I spend every hour having a meal.


I spend everyan hour having aat each meal.

Namely, three hours a day or forty-five days a year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds other thirty days.


Also, I need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds another thirty days.

To sum up, it's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school.


To sum it up, ithat's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school.

However, principal prooves that Bob is wrong.


However, the principal prooves that Bob isBob wrong.

The question is: What's wrong with Bob's calculations?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Bob has missed a significant number of classes; consequently, the principal invites the truant to his office.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"How come you skipped so many classes?"


"How come you’ve skipped so many classes?"

" You know, I've calculated my time and realized that I have no time for studies. I need to sleep eight hours a day, which is close to one hundred twenty-two days a year. Weekends take one hundred and four days a year. Summer holidays take around sixty days. I spend an hour at each meal. Namely, three hours a day or forty-five days a year. Also, I need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds another thirty days. To sum it up, that's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school." However, the principal proves Bob wrong.


" You know, I've calculated my time and realized that I have no time for studies. I need to sleep eight hours a day, which is close to one hundred twenty-two days a year. Weekends take one hundred and four days a year. S, and summer holidays take around sixty days. I spend an hour at each meal. N; namely, that’s three hours a day or forty-five days a year. Also, I’d need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds another thirty days. To sum it up, that's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school."

However, the principal proves Bob wrong.

Don’t rely on the full stop too much, ‘and’ and comma’s are your friends too! (:

" You know, I've calculated my time and realized that I have no time for studies. I need to sleep eight hours a day, which is close to one hundred twenty-two days a year. Weekends take one hundred and four days a year , and summer holidays take around sixty days. I spend an hour at each meal; namely, that’s three hours a day or forty-five days a year. Also, I ’d need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds another thirty days. To sum it up, that's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school."


However, the principal proves Bob wrong.


"How come you ’ve skipped so many classes?"


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